Part 5
“Humm.. Very
good! But you should give some attention to English also!” Papa said looking
into the progress report of Dharini. She
had scored cent percent in almost everything except language. Dharini nodded guiltily. She resolved to study language next year
well. Dhaatri was still hiding behind
her Mamma clutching her report card,
Tears still welling up her eyes.
Papa looked at her. Mamma was
smiling happily.
“Dhatri,
come here!” Papa called her and she came forward with her tried and tested
weapon. “Awanaaaa...!” she opened her
mouth and started crying loudly. Mamma
smiled. “She is upset!” Mamma said. “Why?” asked Papa and Dharini poked her nose
opening her mouth. “She has got A and
cross mark on all subjects, so she has failed in everything...!Thats what she
thinks!” Dharini said giggling and Dhaara increased the tempo of her crying
loudly.
“Its ok! Let
me see your report!” he stretched out his hand and pulled Dhatri on his
lap. Dhatri cried on his shoulder with
running nose and dripping saliva from her mouth. Papa wiped her tears and face from his ironed
handkerchief. “It’s ok, beta. Let me see your cross marks!” he said taking
the report card from her hand. Broad
smile appeared on his face as he saw the card.
It was A+ on her report card. “How
many of your friends got this?” he asked stroking her head. “Umm.. Rajesh, Righima, Ajinkya and me!” she
said between her sobs.
“These are
not cross marks. These are + marks. That means you have done well. Good!...Very Good...!” he held her to his
heart and kissed her forehead.
“B.But I
didn’t get numbers like Rini Didi! She got 100 numbers...!” Dhatri was again
crying. Dharini had dashed in. She brought her old report card of Jr. KG and
showed it to Dhatri.
“See, Dhaa!
Even I had got ‘A’ and cross marks everywhere!” she said giggling. Dhatri pursed her lips sulkily and looked at
her Papa. He nodded grinning at his
youngest daughter.
“Now to
celebrate Dhatri’s ‘A’ and cross marks I made Kheer. Dhaa’s favourite! So come on. Let us have dinner!” Mamma declared. Disha had stayed with her friend
Nihira. They both were tensed up about their 10th
result which was to be declared anytime soon.
Dhaa and
Dharini jumped in the air and went into the kitchen to lay the table. Mamma smiled at Papa, “Disha is tensed up
about her results..!” She said getting little serious.
“Naturally...!”
Papa was casual about the results. He
knew his daughters very well. Disha had
studied well. She had been a meritorious
student throughout, never missing her first rank. Tenth was a bet stressful for her. There were many expectations from her by her
teachers. She was a bit worked up with
all the tension and stress, but determined to do well. But as the results approached, she became
restless. Mamma had happily agreed when
Disha said she would be staying at the friend’s house overnight.
Dr. Salil
and Nilima went into the kitchen. Laxmi
bai had helped her girls and had gone back to her house in the backyard. Dr. Salil had given her the outhouse to stay
with her husband. Her husband, an old
limping man did the odd jobs and maintained the garden of the house.
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The phone
bell rang and Dr. Salil picked up the phone.
He heard the noise at the other end and waited patiently for someone to
speak. His face lit up with a smile.
“thank you!”
he said. “Umm.. She is not here right
now but tomorrow morning she will be here!” he said. “Ok. Yes! I will!” he said and kept the phone
down with trembling hand. “Nilima...!”
he called out in excitement. Nilima came
out.
“Disha stood
first ...!” he said squeezing her hand.
She grinned. The two girls came
out.
“Did you
hear that? Disha stood first to the school!” Mamma was on the top of the
world. Dr. Salil shook his head.
“No!” he
said and paused. Nilima looked up at him
with bated breath.
“She is
first to CBSE board. Number one in the
country! She made me proud!” he said grinning at her and the girls jumped with
joy. “Laxumbai.... Laxumbai...!”.
Dhaatri ran towards backyard screaming at the top of her voice. Laxmi bai was a play mate to her. Dharini followed.
“Laxumbai....
Dhatri was at her door and Laxmi bai looked up.
Her husband was on the bed taking rest in the evening.
“Laxumbai....
Didi stood first!” Dhatri gave the new hurriedly before Dharini could open her
mouth.
“Aray wah!
Where is she?” Dayal kaka got up from the bed in excitement. Laxmi bai had a broad smile on her face. She brought some sugar.
“Wah... I
knew. Our Didi is very intelligent..! I
knew!” she said stuffing sugar first in her mouth, then Dhatri and then
Dharini. Then she came to her
husband. “See.. our girls...!” she said
proudly and Dayal chacha grinned happily.
“Mamma bulaa
rahai hain! Mamma is calling you!” Finally Dharini said and they all moved out
of the outhouse closing the door. It was
celebration time indeed. Dr. Salil and
Dayal chacha went out to get Disha back. And Nilima served Kheer to everyone. Laxumbai too was on the top of the world
waiting for Disha to return.
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“Stop!” was
an order. The TV paused. “That girl..!” someone pointed out at the
small girl on screen. The persons
standing looked at each other.
“That is the
girl!” he took out his gun and stood up with a jerk. Others stood in attention. “Go get her!” was another order and a group
of eight people moved out of the hideout.
They were on the hunt.
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Disha came
home jumping and running. Her manna
hugged her tightly kissing her. Feeding
her sweets for her success. Dharini and
Dhatri were jumping around in excitement.
Disha pulled Dhatri into a tight embrace and kissed her happily. Dharini hugged both of them. They all were at the top of the world with
Disha being first in the nation. She was
happy. The world was happy!
Soon the
reporters lurked and marched in with cameras.
Mamma pulled Disha inside and helped her to get ready to face the
camera. Disha and her parents interview
was inspiring.
“I want to
make my career in astrophysics..!” she said dreamily. The news that she baged first rank was all
over all the channels. People were
pouring in to congratulate her and talk to her.
Dhatri and Dharini never left her side.
Dhatri held her hand tightly looking around victoriously as if she was
the topper. Disha picked her up
fondly. Dhatri kissed her Didi’s cheek
and ran inside shying away. The footage
aired on every channel. 10th
results brought happiness to this peace loving family.
He was watching
then in his hideout switching on the TV.
The moment she saw Dr. Salil Dixit on the screen, his eyes were glued to
the screen for a slightest trace of her.
And there she was, grinning broadly on the screen.
Immediate
orders were issued. The hunt was to be
completed in record time. They knew
where she was. They knew how to reach
there. They knew ... hot to.. complete
the kill! There was celebration in the naxal camp too!
A student
from Vidisha had made it to the National merit list. Disha stood first. Bhanu
Pratap Singh, his friends called him BPS, watched the TV unblinkingly. “So she has made it! Haan!” he blurted with
bright eyes.
“I should
congratulate her!” he got up to get ready....
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ReplyDeletePlease comment on this part. Hope you like it. Please let me know!
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KF
loved it..the story is unfolding slowly
ReplyDeleteHey di,that was a very cute update.That cross one on the report card was damn hilarious.Anyways,I hope those people won't hurt dhaatri.Knots are opening up great.Loved it.Continue soon.
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Loved The progress report it was cute A and cross marks. Who is BPS? who they are hunting
ReplyDeletehope Dhaatri will be safe. So the story is unfolding little by little. waiting for next update.
Love reading the younger siblings innocence...waiting to read more...
ReplyDeletewow dear... dat card is so gud.. hahaha... wow celebration time.. but wat was dat... dhaatri is in grt danger.. oh dear... waiting 4 d next one...
ReplyDeleteOh no - there is some one after Dhaatri. For her healing powers I am sure. You have portrayed such a close knit loving family. Such a pleasure to read. Please do continue - the story is unravelling very nicely..
ReplyDeletehey this is getting more interesting and thrilling than opposite poles really..update soon..
ReplyDeleteStory line is very good so far . Will continue to read but only one question
ReplyDeleteWhy did you give the girls names all with D
Disha Dhatri Dharini
It's confusing at present -to keep up which sibling is doing what where 😖
Dear KF - very interesting story.. there is no romance.. but then you are bringing in the suspense factor and ofcourse your fabulous writing style.. story is progressing well ma'am.
ReplyDeleteLoved Dharti. How cute! Small things of childs antice u given, it was enjoyable, wouldnt able to smile while reading. So, Dharti was stalking by strangers. looking forward to unfold the truth. Thank You.
ReplyDeleteHi Khushifan.....all the backdrops set.....so we are entering the turning points in the story now....even though it's fiction it somehow manages more similarities to the real world... not sure when i would be able to read your next update.....but till then an anxiety would be running in the back of my mind as to which small girl is going to be the victim...
ReplyDeleteThank you....
Hi KF , at last got the opportunity to read ur story dhatri..... Liked the story .....I have had only a brother and reading ur story it's like I am living ur story with two sisters...I love dhatri reaction about her her report card ....A and a cross ...will be eagerly waiting for ur updates ...
ReplyDeleteHi Khushifan!!
ReplyDeleteThe innocence of a child is so beautiful!! It was sweet and I had a big smile on my face. Loved the way she wanted to be the first to tell the news, and enjoying the adulation!! A twist then... now why would the naxals be interested in this little girl, unless she has troubled them before???? Great update Khushifan,... more curiosity awakened!!
Ohh, or is it Dhatri's unusual strength that they are interested in???
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