“You also go
out!” she yelled and the lady went out closing her door. Dhatri looked around. There were no windows. She sat on the cot. Her Rini didi would have helped her wear the
new dress. She started crying
again. The lady came back in.
“What happened?”
she asked.
“Shuuuuu.....!”
Dhatri cried. “What?” the lady
asked. “Number 1” Dhatri said lifting
her frock up.
“Ok...!
Come!” she opened the door and Dhatri dashed out like an arrow. Someone ran after her. She had already reached downstairs. Before anyone could catch her, she had reached
the main door. Bijoy caught her from
behind and lifted her.
“Don’t you
every try to do that. There are gun men
out there. They will shoot you!” he told
her.
“Shoot me?”
she looked confused.
“Like they
did to your mother!” he threatened her.
Hearing ‘mother’ she broke into tears.
“I... want
to go back. I want my mother... she is
hurt!” she said crying her heart out.
“She must be
dead by now!” the same grumpy man who slapped her said with a glint.
“Dead? What
is dead?” she asked. Bijoy felt a knot
in his heart. Poor soul, doesn’t even
know what is death...! he thought gravely grabbing her.
I want to go
back....! she cried out. The grumpy man
raised his hand to beat her up again.
She fell silent looking frightened.
Bijoy took her away. The lady had
reached. She took Dhatri from him.
“I will take
care of her!” she said and Bijoy went out to arrange for the vehicle. Their stay was over. They needed to move....!
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“No.....! I
am not going in..... Awnaaaaaa....!” she was crying stomping, kicking and
bashing in the air. The grumpy man had
lifted her above his head and was walking in.
She was scared to the core and she peed out. “No..!” both of them
screamed and he put her down immediately.
She grabbed the opportunity and ran in opposite direction only to be
caught by another ghostly person. He
slapped her so hard that she fainted with everything going black in front of
her eyes.
“Stop it!”
the man yelled lifting her again and entering the darkness. They had reached their next destination. They were to lie low for some days till the
dust settled down. She was not ready to
go in. The person had no other
option. He had to slap her hard.
Bijoy came
out running. “Give her to me!” he said
sternly.
“Shut up!”
the man said carrying her in. A sole
lantern was burning in that dark cave. People were moving around easily with
flickering long shadows. “Its good that
she is unconscious. She would be scared
here..!” Bijoy thought sitting by her side on the floor. The ice like cold floor made him shiver. He looked at her innocent sleeping face. He couldn’t stop himself.
“I think we
made a big mistake bringing her here!” he said loudly in Bengali. “Shut up!” the grumpy man yelled. “No, I will not, until I get the reason!”
Bijoy yelled back.
“You are not
to ask Questions, Comrade!” Gurmpy man
stood before him authoritatively. Bijoy
took a step forward. “No!” he said with
determination. “I want the answers...
This is not our style. We are against
the government agencies... not against a small kid...!” he was yelling losing
his temper. The grumpy man came on to
him aggressively and hit him with the
butt of his gun. Bijoy fell down
unconscious with blood oozing out profusely from his forehead. The grumpy man dragged Bijoy and brought him
where she was laid down.
It was
almost midnight and Dhatri opened her eyes in that unknown cave. She sat up.
The sole lantern was burning dimly.
She looked at Bijoy sleeping next to her with. There were people at the mouth of the cave
around a camp fire and were talking in some unknown language. Dhatri didn’t understand anything. She was hungry. She put her hand in her pocket and found a
few chocolates. She stuffed one in her
mouth. Her frock was wet. She opened her mouth to cry out loudly but
stopped suddenly as the lantern flickered and she saw a ghostly shadow. She closed her eyes trying to find something
to hide herself. She found Bijoy’s warm
body and crept near him. She put her arm
around his neck trying to hide herself in his arms and felt the wetness of
blood on his shirt. Her eyes
closed. She fell silent moving her hand
on his face, she sensed something was terribly wrong with him.
“You are not
well....!” she murmured. She touched his
wound with both her hands and they started moving in circle around his would involuntarily. She closed her eyes going into trance and he
was gaining consciousness.
“Hufff..... hum...huh...!”
he moaned but no one heard. Her fingers
were moving faster, with her body temperature rising rapidly. He felt the warmth around his would and
opened his eyes with great effort. She
was sitting at his head and was moving her fingers rhythmically. He felt a surge of warmth entering his body
and no pain in his head. The pain had
vanished. The bleeding had stopped. The warmth from her fingers was entering his
body through the wound, he was feeling better.
The fingers were moving faster and faster and he heard a faint groan of
pain from her. She had collapsed on the
floor lifeless. He sat up and touched
her. Her body was burning hot. He yelled.
A woman came running in.
“What?” she
asked. “The kid is ..... dead..!” Bijoy
lifted the kids lifeless body. She bent
down and touched the neck of Dhatri. She
sensed the pulse from the burning hot body.
“Oh! She has
fever...!” she lifted her up and brought her out in the breeze. The grumpy man looked more grumpy. Bijoy walked out ignoring everyone. He was feeling much better as if nothing had
happened and no one had hit him. “Unbelievable!” he thought wondering about the
miracle. He touched his forehead. There were traces of the wound but the pain
had gone. He hurriedly went inside
taking a water bottle from his sack.
Hi
ReplyDeleteI am sorry. Not recovered fully ... feeling weak.
So only one post today. I will post 31st Dec. night tomorrow.
But please read this and let me know your comments.
You know? i get very few comments on this. Hope you like the story.
KF
oh..poor baby. .feeling v bad of dhatri..pls dont make ds hard on hher. .
ReplyDeleteLoved it KF...
ReplyDeleteHow can that Grumpy guy be Harsh on dhatri...i Dont like him at all...
And i Like Bijoy...Hes taking care of Dhaa...Hes Kind to her :)Hes like a Friend in enemy group for Dhaa...
Hope he'll find a way to Send her back.
Update soon ;)
Your's
Me(wink wink)He He :D
Hi KF, I love how this story is shaping up and love little Dhaatri's spirit. And wonderful that she has found an ally among the enemies. Am sure she will give these Naxals a run for their money :)
ReplyDeletePlease take care of your health and do get well soon.
ha dear... totally loved it dear... feeling very bad when dhaatri gets slap... u really know how a 5 yr old kid will behave.. so cute.. her pranks is so enjoyable.. but wat to do she's with them...
ReplyDeletebijoy... started to love dis character.. oh poor got hurt.. ha healed with our cute little fingers of dhaatri... loved his decision... but our dhaatri... she's so hungry... oh dear... keep writing... dis is so interesting...
also dear... tc of ur health... we will wait for u & ur writeups though its very difficult for us... ur health is first.. tc...
Dear KF take care of your health. we can wait. Feel like crying when little daa gets slapped. but happy for her atleast she has Bijoy who is kind hearted. Hope that baby will be back with her parents and sisters soon.
ReplyDeleteHey KF, the story is progressing well. Hope Bijoy will save her. Cant wait for the next update for both stories!!..
ReplyDeleteGet well soon and take care..
its painful..a small girl..how can they behave like this..
ReplyDeletedont worry about the comments dear..your story is wonderful pls continue at your ease
Hey di,it was a lovely update.Damn that grumpy man.How can he be so cruel to a small,innocent child.He deserves several good kicks!But atleast dhaatri has Bijoy to look after her.I'm beginning to like his character.I hope he's successful in sending her back to home safely.
ReplyDeleteWaiting for next update di and please look after yourself.
GET WELL SOON!
Love
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Hi Khushifan!!
ReplyDeleteA touching update. Loved her indomitable spirit, the firebrand!! Her sense of healing power spontaneously bringing in warmth and love in others... great!!
Very captivating description of events. Suspense, fear, pity fear, doubt. A mixture of feelings uncertain, tense events admirably described.
ReplyDeleteIt gives the impression that these words, "when I am weak then I am strong" seems to work in your story.
good job