“She still
has high fever... Not responding to the treatment...!” Doctor said gravely and
Salil’s heart sank.
“Her
reports....!” Dr. Salil gaped at the stretched out file. He didn’t have the courage to take it. He looked at her daughter on that death
bed. Her involuntary movements stabbed
him. Her hands were twitching... the IV
had oozed out under the skinn swelling her hand like a balloon. A nurse hurriedly came in to remove the IV
needle. She ointment for her superficial
thrombosis, lifting her hand and keeping it in upright position with the help
of the strap hung on the bar of her bed.
He
gaped....! “Umm... doctor... Can we shift her to another hospital?” he asked
hopefully. “Will it help?” he asked
praying hard for a positive answer.
There was no response from the doctor for a while...
“She is
critical... It will be a big risk to move her in this condition...!” The doctor
said gravely. Salil stared at her
twitching hands.....! “She is sensing malady, illness...everywhere...!” he
thought looking around seeing patients everywhere. “She should be moved away from this
environment....!” he made up his mind.
“Doctor..
Can we shift her to a private room? Away ...!” He asked holding doctor’s hand.
“I will
check. But it will cost...!”
“I will
manage... Please Doctor?” Salil urged. The
doctor moved, he followed. “Please
Doctor, do something...if we can shift her to private room... I will pay... I
can manage...!” he pleaded. That was the
only solution he could think of. The
doctor looked at him intently rubbing his palms. Salil looked at him.
“Yes,
doctor...! Tell me how much..!” the doctor was expecting his cut in the
deal. “Five!” he said and Salil
agreed. Things moved faster than
expected when Salil paid the Doctor five thousand rupees, under the table and soon she was shifted to a private airy
room on the top floor. Salil took a sigh
of relief.
“We do not
know the cause of her fever... “ said the dean seriously. Dr. Salil looked on. He knew the reason but couldn’t talk about
it. No one would believe him and he
wouldn’t tell anyone to put his Dhaa in more trouble.
“Does she
get fever frequently?” Doctor asked looking at the test reports. Salil nodded.
“How frequently?” Doctor interrogated.
“Frequently..!” answered Salil. “How
does she get well?” asked the doctor.
Salil fumbled.
“Cold water
bath and Crocin...!” he gave a lame answer.
“Strange...!
She sustains that kind of high fever...!” exclaimed the doctor. Salil looked away.
“This looks
like some kind of autoimmune disease...!I am not sure...!” the doctor blurted
and went away. Dhatri still on the bed
with oxygen mask opened her eyes.
“Doctor...!”
Salil went out hurriedly to call the doctor seeing his daughter opening her
eyes after a week in the hospital. ...
The person under the blanket sitting on the wooden bench on the top floor of
the hospital got up to go!!
********** *********
“Rini...
Stop! Don’t speak on her behalf. Let her
speak..!” Salil said sternly. Dhatri was looking at her family nervously
locking her fingers.
“Yeah..
ok...Dhaa.. tell them...!” Rini ordered Dhaa and she opened her mouth fidgeting
nervously.
“Yeah.. I
mean... as Rini Didi says... Science..!” she said weakly casting glances at
Dharini and her father. Salil shook his
head hopelessly.
“Rini.. you
are letting her grow like a parasite... !” he said gravely and went away. Rini gave a broad smile and hugged her Dhaa,
snatching her tenth standard marks list.
Dhatri hugged her back, relieved.
“Rini
didi...!” Dharini started off weakly but Rini was not ready to listen to
anything. She was dancing with Dhaa’s
marks list.
“Good...Very
Good!” she patted on Dhaa’s back.
“shabaash...!” Rini was happy with Dhaa’s results. Dhaa got ninety percent in her CBSE board
exams, less than her elder sisters. Both Disha and Dharini had secured their
places in the merit lists. But everyone in the family was very happy. Disha had called up from USA. Rini was in her second year Mechanical
Engineering and was waiting for her results, sure that she would top
again.
“Rini
didi...!” Dhatri tried again.
“Shuuu....
Dhaa... Stop. I know you will do it...
Don’t worry!” Rini said in a hushed voice and Dhatri’s resistance died out.
Dr. Salil
went into his room to find Nilima sitting at the study table scribbling
something. “Writing to Maasi Maa...!”
she said smiling at him. He sighed and
put his arm around her shoulder from behind, resting his head on her
shoulder. She patted sympathetically.
“Don’t
worry!” she said looking at his grave face.
“We should
keep her away from Rini...!” he said sitting on another chair beside his
wife. Nilima smiled...
“Humm... I
know..!” she said and got up. “Soon Rini
will also move out..!” she had tears. “Yeah...
probably, she will be the first woman to join Army from this part of the
country..!” Dr. Salil said proudly. Rini
had a dream to join Indian Army....!
Thank you very much for all your comments. hope you like this one too...
ReplyDeletePlease leave your comments..
KF
Hey KF..You had a huge leap here??
ReplyDeleteGlad Dhaa is bac to her family and her life
almost a 10yr leap....had to go back, re read to confirm it...so now 2 events in her past that link to her healing capability..eager to know what future holds for her and her loved ones.......
ReplyDeleteThank you Khushifan...
This was a flashback right? I wasn't sure... Cool!!
ReplyDeleteKuch samajh nai aaya..i think after next update will be able to join the dots
ReplyDeletewow dear... am so glad dat dhaatri is back... wow... so dat person must be bijoy... rite.. so gud...
ReplyDeletewow... dhaatri passed tenth.. superb.... waiting very eagerly for the next one dear...
Finally breathing that dhaa is back!Such a relief!Dhaa passed tenth with such cool marks and Rini and disha are doing great too!Loved the update.Please continue soon di.
ReplyDeleteLove
Dewdrop
was not clear was it flashback or a big leap. Maybe after next update things will be little more clear.
ReplyDeleteSo more problems for her because of her healing ability
fantastic update........waiting 4 da next part.........plsss cont soon...btw bit confused is dhaatri well and back now????
ReplyDeleteHi Khushifan!!
ReplyDeleteSo a change in the environment brought her back from death; and the mystery man left the place happy. WOW, a big leap in the story. Loved "you are letting her grow like a parasite"... what an influence she is on her little sister!! So is Science her weak subject?
You have taken the story so interestingly. From desolation, darkness to light, joy and fun. Lovely and enjoying it. Thanks Khushifan!!
It is annoying that I can't make my views more emphatic, graphic and colourful with the use of emoticons, which, unwittingly, has become a part of our expression in blogs, right??? I only hope that my views have made some sense to you in the right way!! Thanks dear!!!