Sayajirao
and Ray had reached Detroit, at Bhanu's apartment. Disha was to join
them soon from Huntsville..! She called up in the evening to tell
them that she was not coming as she had a weekend meeting with her
guide. Ray looked at his dad. "There may be some real urgent
issue...!" he defended Disha. "Huff..! Couldn't she plan
properly? Ladies....!" he blurted disdainfully and Bhanu and
Sayajirao exchanged looks. By now they both knew his remarks about
girls.
The
poolside barbeque was a delight. Ray had devoured the food like a
starved person. Here too the chef was his father, grabbing the
opportunity to show of his cooking skills. Bhanu had helped. Ray
relaxing on the chair enjoying the food. "How is it...?"
his Dad asked with expectation. Ray smacked his lips...
"Umm...
ok. Dad...Nowhere nearer to what Nanu prepared...!" Sayajirao
threw his hands in the air disappointed. "Nanu?" Bhanu
asked puzzled.
"Nanu...
his yardstick in cooking...!" Sayajirao said grinning. "Yes..
she is! She is the best...!" reinforced Ray. "Who is
Nanu?" Bhanu asked.
"His
tribal friend....!" Clarified Sayajirao. "Friend..?"
Exclaimed Bhanu. "Yeah.. My Friend Nanu... age around seventy
five years... five years back...!" said Ray proudly stuffing the
chicken piece in his mouth.
"Oh...
you mean, your expedition in India...!" Everything was clear to
Bhanu. He grinned winking at Ray. Ray looked away ignoring him.
"Rice
and mutton curry...!" muttered Sayajirao. "And a piece of
gud....!" Ray added. "And Buttermilk...!" he added
further raising his hand.
"I have yogurt.. if you insist..!"
Bhanu said moving towards the refrigerator. "No need...!"
Ray dismissed. The taste of Nanu's rice and curry still lingering in
his mind, he picked up another piece of barbequed chicken.
"And
he had a fight with others over the food and Nanu gave him special
chops... and a place in the kitchen and extra rice and extra
gravy..." Sayajirao mouthed Ray's words he had heard them umpteen
number of times...
"Dhutt Teri was furious, when Nanu gave me those
extra spicy chops...!" he smiled.
"Yeah...!"
said Ray longing for that rice and curry again. "She has got a
hearing aid now... She will hear me...!" he thought closing his
eyes. Nanu had a special prominent place in his heart, though she
too was a woman. He detested women, hating them to the core. But
Nanu... he never considered her in women category... she was a class
by herself... for him, she was Nanu!! Above everything...!Everything was best about her... her food... her grin... her slap on his shoulder... her slimy sweet chikki.... and her laps... where he slept peacefully....!!
He
had arranged to send her a hearing aid through teacher...! Teacher
was in touch with him and he kept sending money for the betterment of
the people of the settlement. Teacher kept updating him about the
progress. "Pappa and Putta both had married .. and Pappa had a
child. Baby boy...!
"Nanu
must be busy with the infant... she must have forgotten me..!"
his heart filled with sadness. "Hope I meet her again...!"
he longed. Sayajirao was watching the
changing expressions on Ray's face.
"Sonny...
come back from Nanu's house..!" that brought him back on earth.
"Ha... so shall we start? I am hungry..!" Ray got up to
grab a plate.
"What
were you doing till now?" Bhanu Exclaimed... "Only
starters... where is the main course?" Ray asked opening the
lids of the containers and inhaling the aroma....!
The
door bell rang. "I will open...!" Bhanu went to open the
door. Ray was busy ladling himself the delicious food and devouring
it down his throat. Bhanu didn't return for a long time and
Sayajirao grew restless.
"I
will check..!" he too went inside. Ray filled himself to the
brim and relaxed on the easy chair. He heard nothing from inside.
He walked in casually and stopped looking at a lady sitting,
fidgeting nervously. He looked around. Bhanu looked nervous too.
Sayajirao was sitting across hanging his head.
"Dad?"
he called and the lady looked up. "Saya?" she looked at
Sayajiroa and got up slowly. Ravi looked at her blankly and then his
gaze travelled to his father's ghostly face.
"Ummm...
he is Ray Dav...e...!" Introduced Bhanu nervously. "Ray?"
Ray was surprised. Bhanu had insisted on calling him Ravi... to hear
'Ray' from him sounded weird. "Bhai..?" Ravi blurted. The
lady had come forward. He looked at her measuring her up. She must
have been in the forties... with dyed short hair in streaks, shorter skirt, gray top and a clutched purse. She looked
paler with her fair complexion and dark circles under her eyes. She
looked up at him and he froze. She had gray eyes with the same blue
tinge, as he had. He looked at his dad and the realization dawned. He clenched
his fists with his muscles flexing.
“Saya....!
Is he...?” she asked Sayajirao and Bhanu intervened.
“Maasi...
please... I think you should leave now...!” he inadvertently stood
between Ray and her. She came around and stood before Ray. “He is
grown up...!” she said with wide eyes.
“Maasi...
please...!” Bhanu held her hand. He saw Ravi's expressions
changing and pulled her away losing his strength.
“What
do you do, son?” she asked sweetly. “Business...!” Ray blurted
.. “Studying..!” Bhanu and Sayajiroa found their voices. Ray
looked at his father.
“Maasi...
he is studying …!” Bhanu tried his level best. But she had heard
what she wanted to hear.
“You
must be doing well, Son! After all you are...!” her eyes traveled
to Sayajirao and he fidgeted. She came closer and Ray contorted his
face with the strong odor.... he glanced at the empty glasses on the
table and looked away. She was drunk.
“Maasi...please
come...!” Bhanu pulled her away. “No! Wait..!” Ray stopped
him. “Dad?” he questioned and his Dad nodded hanging his head.
Ray looked at the lady, his eyes spitting fire...
“Son...!”
she was all set to embrace him. “No!” he paced backwards and she
stopped.
“Maasi...
Chalo... I will help you...!” Bhanu said again holding her hand.
“No
wait... Bhanu!” Sayajirao intervened gravely and turning to her
asked... “How much?” her eyes flashed with greed.
“A
grand?” she asked turning to him. He took out money and she
suddenly looked sober. Ray glared at his father who looked dejected.
“Umm...
I mean.... its so embarrassing to take help.... “ she turned to Ray
and continued... “From your father.... son...!” No one reacted.
“I didn't know you are grown up and …. earning....!” her voice
trailed looking at Ray's stone face....!
“Maasi...
please leave...!” Bhanu said sternly and she understood that there
is no point lingering for a longer time. She got up. “You are
grown into a handsome guy!” she complemented.
“I
am leaving, Dad!” he gave an ultimatum clenching his fists and she
understood. Ray barged out of the house like a storm and Sayajirao
picked up his bag.
“I
think we should leave now. Bhanu didn't stop him. “Disha will
drive back the car...!” he blurted the earlier decided plan. “I
am sorry, Uncle...!” he apologized...!
***********
Sayajirao
gazed at his now sleeping son, with a photo of a girl, laughing,
tossing her head back, flashing deep dimples on her cheek,... on the
screen...! He picked up the remote to switch off the screen but
decided otherwise gazing at the pleasant appearance of the girl.
“Dhutt
Teri...!” he too blurted pulling the duvet over sleeping Ravi. “I
can't help, Sonny! You are the most valuable thing she has given
me... !” he blurted gravely and walked out of his son's room...
Dhatri's picture still flashing on the screen....!
Hello All,
ReplyDeleteThank you for your comments and for reading the updates.
Nisha, Thanks a lot. And let us see how the story unfolds... I too hope that Rini stays safe...
Aparna, Thank you for letting me know that you read the updates. I was missing your comments...!
Mymind, You are right! Its a common scenario.. in Soldier families.. But in this case, Rini was the first one to opt for Armed Forces in Dixit family and for them everything is new....!! Hope these are mere words ... and she stays safe...! hehehe Humm! For Ray, Dhaa’s mere presence, though in thoughts makes him smile...!! She too doesn’t come under his category of ‘woman’
Thanks a lot once again.... and hope you like this update, unfolding Ray’s story....!
Love
KF
Hi di,intriguing update!Poor Ravi,I feel so bad for him.It must feel awful to have a mother who doesn't love you and hadn't bothered to see you for years.Though,I'm curious what interest does Dhaatri hold for Sayajirao?Please continue soon di.
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Hey..M Finally able 2 comment...felt n still feeling bad for not commenting on each update..i even missed reading it on the same day you update :(
ReplyDeleteYou see First my net issues...then power issues..I wanted to write about every part...will not be able to do it now..but will definetly share my views either here or some how...but m gng 2 let u know..Give me few more days,may be 4 or 5...will be back to my routine by then n my usual rantings for update :P
You cant get rid of me easily :P
Loved your updates...n love u story..
Yours,
ME :P
Loved the categorization..."Mutant", "Nanu"...and other "Women"!.."Way to a Man's heart is through his stomach"...Nanu became his loved one through this recipe...along with her TLC....
ReplyDeleteHmmm...Bhanu and Ray are maternal cousins...and the former is in contact with her... but Ray hasn't seen her?
Interesting update...thank you Khushifan...
Hi kf,
ReplyDeletenice update...now we know d reason behind Ray's perception about women..
poor Ray n poor Sayajirao....
Also curious 2 noe abt d incident which made Ray think of Dhaa as a mutant... Pls tell dat side of d story soon...
n also very curious to noe abt rini's journey at J&K n dat mysterious Mr. Vikram....
update soon...
with lots of love..
Hey.
ReplyDeleteReally nice update.I really love ur style of writing n ur unique story.D hardwork u put behind every detailing is quite commendable.Um a fan of urs since u started writing 31st dec night.Its d best ff I had ever read..Thanks for writing such beautiful stories.
Please continue soon.
Hope everything is fine at your end....festivities main doob gaye ya festivities ne dubaa diya;)
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Hi Khushifan!!
ReplyDeleteOkay, I got your answer on Ravi... so just the memories of Dhaatri makes him smile.... after all, she is a mutant and not a woman!!
A great insight into the character of Ravi. His disdain on women, and his special relationship with friend Nanu. The way he was reminiscing about Nanu, so fondly with longing.... her food, her grin, her slap, her slimy sweet chikki and her laps... really has made a lasting impression on him and a permanent place in his heart. Could be 'cos, the love that he never received from his mother, he found in Nanu, and hence she is special. And after going through such fond thoughts, coming face to face with the reality of his mother's image has hit him like a thunderbolt. Ahhh, an image of Dhutt Teri on his screen!!
Lovely update!!