“Do you really
believe what she said?” Swarnima blurted the question after almost a day after
mulling over the fall of events... Apparently all of them seemed to have bought
the story. None of them had met
Sayajirao before...! Salil shook his head.
“But we can’t
afford to take chances.... Its over.... let us drop the matter...!” he said
gravely.
“Wish I could
talk to Rini...!” Nilima blurted, still not wanting to believe...!
“Yeah... But
she is on that Joint Military Exercise...!” Blurted Salil in despair.
“I think, you
should talk to Indroneel Bhaisaab...!” Nilima suggested...
“But why, Nilima?
We have already decided... “ Salil said confused. Nilima didn’t answer but decided to call
Indroneel herself. She had seen Ravi
taking care of Dhatri, getting worried about her. Rini had told her how much he cared for
Dhaa. She never mentioned anything ill
about his father. Rini would have told
Nilima if she had sensed something weird....! On the contrary, Rini had all
the praises for Sayajirao...! Except for Disha and now Sanyogita, all the
family members loved Sayajirao... Even Kalindi was on his side. Nilima couldn’t digest what was told to her
by Sanyogita...!
“If a man can
take care of an infant child and turn him into such a good human being, how can
he himself be so cruel and pervert...?” She failed to understand. She glanced at Swarnima who was staring at
her intently.
“We should have
insisted on meeting Ravi’s father, before calling the marriage off...!”
Swarnima reflected Nilima’s thoughts.
“There’s no
smoke without fire... “ Virender spoke gravely.
“But this is so
hard to believe...!” swarnima protested weakly.
“Why can’t we
just call him up and ask the truth...?” Nilima asked agitated..
“We just did
that.. We called him up to say NO!” Salil said trying to put an end to the
discussion.
"But we didn't ask him the truth.. We just conveyed our decision...!" Swarnima said.
"What do you think, we should have asked, Swarni? That what was the reason for divorce? Is it true, what we heard? That you are a pervert, Torturing your wife, Giving her physical pain, making her sign on the divorce papers, throwing her out, snatching away a month old child?" Virender shot up frustrated. Nilima felt a know in her
stomach. Ravi’s face flashed before her
eyes. “He will be heartbroken...” she
turned her face.
“And what about
Dhaa?” Swarnima asked pulling all of them out of their thoughts and bringing
them to the common factor.
“What about
her? We will talk to her, convince her.. I am sure, she will understand..” said
Virender and Swarnima shook her head hopelessly. “You do not know, what she is made up of... “
Nilima thought ... Dhatri never accepted anyone changing her decision and she
would go to any extent to prove her point...!
“But then, why
didn’t Rini told us anything about it? In fact, she was very happy when we
broke the news about Dhaa and Ravi’s wedding...” Nilima asked.
“How would she
know? Man’s social life and personal life, are two different things, Nilima...
you wouldn’t know how a person behaves with his wife in the bed.. I mean in
their private life...” Salil said little ambarrassed. Nilima looked away awkwardly...!
“Thank god!
Dhatri has her exams... We will think about it later... Let her give her exams
first...” Salil said running his fingers through his hair.
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She went ahead
a few meters and turned ... He was still standing there shocked to the
core. She understood, her face contorted
with rage.. “Fine..!” She came back, stood before him glaring at him and then
said.
“Its over...
Goodbye..!” she walked past him and he held her hand pulling her aside.
“No, Dhaa...
wait...!” he pleaded. She turned her face away from him.
“Dhatri..
listen to me... just for once..!” he urged she was unmoved.
“Dhatri..
please...!” she turned her face. A bitter smile appeared on her face. “Its ok Mr. Ray Dave.. I understand...Its
easier said than done...!” she said contemptuously. He shook his head hopelessly. He knew... she wouldn’t listen to any
argument, nothing will change her mind.
He placed his hands on her shoulder looking into her defiant eyes.
“Ok. Let us get married... Now!” he said and she
turned to walk with him.
“Which temple?”
he asked. She pouted her lower lip and
shrugged.. “Don’t know!”
“Ok!” he said
looking around for a temple, thinking hard.
He needed to give her some time to cool down, then only he would be able
to convince her.
“Do we need any
preparation?” he asked glancing at her. “Don’t
know..!”
“We need a
priest, Dhatri..!” he was sure about this and she looked lost.
“And a few
witnesses...!” he said and she stopped.
That meant they would be informing others about their marriage... She
was not ready for that. She wanted to
get that over ASAP.
“Witnesses?
Why?” she asked. Clearly, she didn’t
know anything about formalities of a legal marriage which she had agreed to.
“How would
others believe us, then?” he asked reasonably and she fell silent, slowing down
considerably. Disha Didi’s wedding
rituals flashed before her eyes and she winced.
“We will go in
for Registered Marriage...!” she had an alternative.
“That requires
a notice period..!” he said gravely looking sad. She stared at her toes for a while. They had reached the cross roads and he saw
the temple across the road.
“Temple...
Look!” he stopped Dhatri and she looked at him.
He seemed to be taking initiative now.
She felt better. She looked up.
“Shivji
Temple...!” her mood brightened up. She
looked up smiling broadly and he drowned himself in her dimples. He gave in... surrendered to her wish, ready
to get married....!
“Let’s go...!”
she left him behind in excitement and crossed the road without bothering about
the oncoming traffic. His heart skipped
a beat hearing the screeching breaks and yelled swearing...! “Careful..” he
raised his hand. She had already reached
the stairs of the temple and then had realized that she had left him
behind. He still was across the road
trying to weed through the heavy traffic...! She frowned.
“Iss
ko toh haath pakadkar laana padega...I have to help him cross the road and bring him to this side...” she
turned and stopped abruptly. A scooter
had stopped inches away from him. Dhatri
saw her remove her helmet, shake hand with Ravi. Her frown deepened... ! Afroz was talking to
Ravi grinning broadly, holding Ravi’s hand.
Ravi too was giving her his captivating, special smile. She decided otherwise and stopped folding her
arms on her chest... apparently very patiently.
Ravi had the opportunity to buy some more time talking to Afroz....! He
glanced across the road to find Dhatri waiting for him... !!
“Fine...
if she is that important, I will go ahead alone.. “ she muttered angrily and
turned to climb the stairs of the Mandir.
“Lagata hain, ab mujhe khud hi se shaadi karani padegi...How am I going
to get married alone?” she banged her forehead.
She thought of waiting for him to show up, but then he was busy having a
little jovial chat with Afroz... Dhatri’s rage shot up.... “Its never, now Mr. ABCD..”
She went inside ringing the huge bell hung, reverberating inside her head like
a warning gong....!!
Thank you for your wonderful comments. Here is a new update for you all...
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Hey do you all think I am dragging the story? If you feel so, say so... I will try to cut it short... I don't want to bore you all with the stretched, dragged updates...!
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Hey Khushifan,
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Thanks for the lighter update.
Thank you Myla...!
DeleteI don't think that or dragging and I really don't want to you to end this story so soon but I want you give more regular updates more often please kf don't end this story and plan so for any reasons please start a fresh one with concept and please don't end this pretty please from my end
ReplyDeleteThanks for letting me know... I will go with decided pace... And this story has a long way to go...
DeletePlease regular updates and don't end this
ReplyDeleteYes... there will be twice a week updates... Thank you for reading the story...
DeleteHi Khushifan!!
ReplyDeleteRavi was trying to buy time to convince her, but then he gave in to her charm so willingly... all very pertinent points put forward... now he is back in the dock!! How much patience he has and need to have to handle Dhaatri with her moods swinging from one end to the other!! Loved the analogy of the ringing bell with the warning gong!! LOL, "lagtha hai, ab mujhe khud hee se shaadi karani padegi"... hehee!!!
Well, a decision taken, and now they are mulling over their decision... is this a case of "act in haste, repent at leisure"??!!!! Looks like the women are having second thoughts and the men are convinced about their decision. Hmmm, 'there's no smoke without fire'.... what twist are you going to bring in now????
Great update and loved the interaction between the two lovebirds, and especially Dhaatri's reactions!! Continue the story the way you want to, Khushifan and the need of the flow to the story!!
Thank you for your beautiful comment... Let us see what happens ... both sisters are going through turbulent skies...
DeleteGood that the family(atleast a part...) is having second thoughts on the reasons they seemed satisfied to pull off the wedding...all the questions and doubts raised by the women are genuine, but are they too late to get a clarification?...After reading this update, it feels Dhaa is still too young or childish to get married...or would marriage do her more good?...
ReplyDeleteI have been reading Dhaatri since it's first post and have enjoyed each update till date...it takes updates to form a perfect built-up for the upcoming twist or something like that...and being the writer of it, only you know how much time you need for it. So I have never felt any dragging while reading the updates...because the more I get the feel of the prologue to the next event..more my anticipation...I did indeed feel it slowing in pace when the frequency of updates changed though...shayad aapne buri aadatein daal di...pehle pehle zyada updates deke... ;)
Thanks for the wonderful read...
You are right...... Dhaa is just around twenty and being youngest always too young to take any decision on her own.... hehehehe...
DeleteThank you mymind for your wonderful comment...
I love the pace of the story, KF - please don't end it yet. Just love how you bring out the emotions of people. Nilima has understood Sayaji Rao beautifully - '“If a man can take care of an infant child and turn him into such a good human being, how can he himself be so cruel and pervert...?" - she nailed it so beautifully but Salil is not so convinced. Ha ha our Dhaa is really in a mood to get married and how Ravi has read her nature so well - just love their cute love story. Waiting for Dhaa to realise her love for Ravi - then all hell will break loose! Thanks for such a lovely update KF
ReplyDeleteThank you very much starlight.... they say, women have sixth sense and understand situations better than men...! Let us see what happens...!
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