Sunday, 1 December 2013

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Dharini waited nervously.  “What am I going to tell him?” she didn’t know the answer. 
“He would arrive anytime ... and I haven’t even had the answer...!” she fidgeted.  Everyone was looking for Dhatri and she had disappeared somewhere.

Disha blew her top.
“How irresponsible...!” she blurted in anger.  “I had told her to make the list of my bags to be carried to the wedding hall and she just has disappeared...” she fumed. 
“Its ok.  I will do it...” Nilima came to Disha’s help. 
“Mama.. .. what’s wrong with her?” Disha asked her mother.  Nilima looked up.

“There is nothing wrong with her, Disha...!” She said calmly. 
“She doesn’t even talk to me properly... I am her elder sister...!” Disha raised her voice. 
“She is so rude.. Mamma... As if I am her enemy, a filth...!” Disha vented out.  Nilima shook her head.  Dhatri and Disha never shared that bond...Dhatri detested Disha’s bossy nature and Disha wanted Dhatri to obey her. 
“I am the eldest... she should listen to me Mamma...!” Disha confronted her mother too. 
“I know!” Nilima said considerately.  But Disha flared up.  “You know! But don’t want to do anything about it! Isn’t it?” she asked getting up.
“I got a bag full of dresses for her... And she? She asked that stupid used salwar kameej from Rini...!!” Disha again lost her control in rage.

She had got the dresses and had shown them to Dhatri.  Dhatri had pulled the dresses out of the bag and was trying them out when Disha had inadvertently said that she had hardly used them.  Dhatri suddenly had thrown the dresses away saying “I don’t use used dresses...” Disha was shocked.
“What do you mean, Dhaa? You always wore our old, used dresses...” Disha said disdainfully pointing at Dhatri's childhood.
“Yeah.. I had no choice... but now I do! My Rini Didi gets me new dresses every time....” Dhatri had retorted back.  Disha felt insulted.  Salil intervened and the argument died out there.  But hurt Disha was waiting for the opportunity to give it back to her youngest sister and when Dhatri asked Dharini about her beige top... Disha blew her top.  This time, Rini had intervened.
“Dhaa... its an old one.  I promise, I will get you a new one of same style and same colour...” she had promised Dhaa. 
“But I don’t mind wearing your used dresses, Rini Didi...” Dhatri had said loudly eyeing on Disha’s reaction.  The rift between the eldest and the youngest was audible and visible... Rini’s bridge was too short to bridge the gap....!!
 “Rini, where is Dhatri?” Disha shook Rini and she winced.  “Don’t know...!” she blurted looking out of the main door.  There was no trace of Dhatri.  Rini grew restless.  She didn’t know what to do!

***** ****
Dhatri hid her face in her palms to calm herself down.... “No... I can’t...!” She looked up tormented with the thought that someone else was in her Didi’s life.  She clenched her fists feeling lonely.... No! she would have no one... Her Rini Didi had someone else....
“Humm....!” someone exhaled sitting by her side on that same stone bench and she yelped. 
“Dhatri...!” said his deep voice and she gaped.  She looked at his side profile.  “Who is he? I have not seen him before...” she thought gauging him.  He looked at her.  She stood up to go.  She never talked to strangers.
“But how does he know my name?” she stopped.  He gestured her to sit.  She did not but didn’t move away either.  She looked at him alarmed...!
“How about having two people at your disposal..?”  He asked mysteriously. 
“What?” 
“Yes...” He got up.  Dhatri looked at his tall figure...!
“RINI ke Saath VINI Free?” he asked looking at her.  She staggered backwards...
“Rini ke saath Vini free?” his words echoed and “Huf... hihi...” she couldn’t hide her smile. 
“Maj. Vinit...!” he introduced himself.... “At your disposal, Madam...!” he added seriously and the sense of authority made her feel better.  Her shyness and fright fading away, she measured him from top to bottom... somehow judging him for her Rini Didi....!!  She sat on the bench again, so did he. 
“So... he is the one....!” she murmured looking away.
“No, Dhatri... you are the one...!”  his sharp ears had heard her murmur.  She turned to face him...
“You are the one.... Dhatri.... your Rini Didi thinks about, all the time...!” he said seriously. 
“How does he know? Rini didi must have told him about me....!” her heart twisted... “Rini Didi shared our secret with him....!” she concluded with bitterness.  She suddenly got up....
“I don’t talk to strangers...” she said angrily...!
“We are not strangers... I know, you are Dhatri and you know, I am Vinit...!” he too had got up. 
“No!!... You will take my Didi away...” her inner fear blurted out....!
“No...! I am coming with your Rini Didi, in your life...” he said and she turned.
“Yeah... Rini ke saath Vini Free... Only for you....! Think about this fabulous offer, Dhatri...!” he again said seriously and she again had to work hard to hide her giggle.
“Not a bad idea...!” her heart said.  “Rini ke saath Vini.... Two-two persons at my disposal..” Her child-like mind jumped....!! She looked up at him removing her hand from her mouth and he gaped at her beautiful dimpled smile. 
“Didi sent you here?” she asked after a short while.  He shook his head.
“I haven’t met your Rini didi... yet!” he said.
“What? You haven’t met her at all?” she yelled bewildered and he gave her a child-like smile.
“No... I mean... not today... I was getting out of the auto... and saw you running out of the house... and... followed..!” he said seriously.  She gaped in shock.  “ I met Dharini four months back...!” he added getting serious. 
“What?’ Dhatri squeaked in shock.
“I was on Sikkim Border...!” he said.  Dhatri gaped in disbelief.... She remembered how desperate Purva, her friend was when she couldn’t meet her boyfriend even for a day.... And her Rini Didi didn’t meet him for last four months....!!

“Shall we...?” he gestured at the stone bench all set to tell her the story...!

“You proposed her in a Tank? Are you crazy?” she asked with wide eyes full of amazement.  He merely nodded. “Why?” she asked bewildered.
“Ghaas hi nahi dal rahi thi...! Toh yeh gadha kya karata?” he said sulking. She giggled tossing her head back... He gaped...!!
“And what did she say?” she asked him pressing her hand on her chest.
“No matter how many times you take me to the other side of the fence, Maj. Vinit... If Dhaa says no... Its a NO from Rini Too!” He mocked Rini and Dhaa felt a knot in her stomach...!
“My Rini Didi...!” she looked down in realization.  She must ensure her Rini Didi’s happiness.  She wrapped silence and then looking up into his eagerly waiting eyes said seriously...
“Promise me.... you will never hurt her...!” he promised pressing his palm on his heart.
“And you will keep her always happy....!” he nodded getting serious too. 
“Humm.... “ she sighed gazing into the distance.  Vinit stared at her bright smiling face and he knew....!

“So? Have I passed?” he asked with a smile.
“What..?” she asked.
“The test?” his smile grew.  Dhatri stroked her chin thinking hard....!! Sharing her Rini Didi... twisted her heart.... a trapped breath left her.

“Dhatri....” he suddenly leaned forward and cupped her face....!!
“You are her little sister....” he looked into her eyes and then said in a whisper... “And mine too....!” she looked up at him with teary eyes.  The genuineness in his gesture touched her heart.  A faint sob fanned his face.  He wiped her eyes...
“If you say NO, Dhatri... I promise... I will go away without meeting her..! She wouldn’t even know, I was here...!” he said seriously taking his hands down.... She looked at his face...
“And what if I say YES?” she asked raising her eyebrows smiling broadly... He looked up at her face... Holding her shoulders, he said grinning...
“Then,  this Vini is at your service, Madam.... Always...” She got up with a jerk....
“Let’s go home...!” she said holding his hand and swinging it happily.  

It wasn't Rini ke saath Vini.... It was Rini ke Saath Dhaa...!! for him..!  He walked with her silently.  

"Shuuu....!" she pressed her finger on her lip as they approached the house.  

"I go first....!" she commanded, he nodded.

"Half an hour...!" she said in a hushed voice.  He grinned...!!

She had a plan.... to rag her Rini didi for getting a brond new Vini for Dhaa....!
 











9 comments:

  1. Hello,
    Thank you all for your beautiful comments...
    Me:P dear, thank you very much..Indeed dhaa and rini are undetachable... !!
    Dayavanti... Good to read, you liked the city... and you know? The secret of romance? Kabhi Kabhi Aisi Choti choti duriya.. pyaar badhati hain!! Wink and a smile...!!

    Akansha, Nice to see your comment after a long time..! Let us see how the relationship and bond between the three develops...!! Thank you very much for reading and commenting...!
    My dearest Mymind... the update is not complete without your comment. So, I always wait for it...! The lighter moments strengthen the bond....! Let us see what happens next...!! hihihihahaha....!!
    Love
    KF

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  2. lovely update...rini ke sath vini free...at ur disposal...he he ;)....conversation between dhaa n vini is very sweet.loved it.and its rini ke sath dhaa for him...this update gave me a warm feeling too :)
    waiting for ur next update..
    Yours,
    Me :P

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  3. Hmmm...so 2 at disposal now...she is already spoilt with just one...Ravi would second that...without taking any extreme measures he(Maj.Vinit) won Dhaa with his sincere efforts...Loved the way he corrected her..."I am coming with your Rini Di...into your life"......waiting to see what Dhaa has planned for Rini...Khushifan...the "hihihihahaha"...seems like a warning bell ;)

    On cloud nine now...spoiling me!..."dearest...incompleteness...waiting for my comment.."..acha laga padke...thank you so much...but it won't match my eagerness for your updates ...aisa tho nahi ki update ko nazar nahi lagni chahiye????? ;).....hihihi

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  4. So good!! So cute... I am blown away!!! Loved the conversation between Dhatri and Maj Vinit. Awesome...

    Still wondering why Disha has become this wierd?

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  5. Wow.... Superb Maj.Vinit... he s soo cool... Man with few words but stil he blows people with that... Rini ke sath Vini... hehehe :D
    I dint like Disha, wats wrong with her???
    Thanks jiji :)
    Lots of love

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  6. So dhaa gor Rini ke saath Vini free!Seriously di,I'm still not over the shock that such a harsh,rude and big-headed man has fallen so irrevocably in love with Rini and has literally turned into jelly! Intriguing!Waiting to see the family'reaction on seeing Vinit,especially our dear termagant Disha's.Please continue soon di!

    Big hug and huge smile!

    Dewdrop

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  7. Loved the last two updates....
    and how different the bond between the sisters are...Dha and Rini so close to each other whereas Disha had drifted so far...How did she turn into such a selfish person...

    Loved "rini ke saath Vini free' and how he was ready to go back even without letting Rini know if Dha said no...He has really understood the bond between the sisters...
    With all the wedding preparations is ray coming to the wedding too?
    Looking forward to the updates...

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  8. Hi Khushifan!!

    Beautiful how "Rini ke saath Vini free" changed to "Rini ke saath Dhaa"!! So he didn't use his extreme measures, but his persuasive charm worked on her.... he does know how to speak, hihihihi!! Loved "two-two persons at my disposal,.. her child-like mind jumped"....such an innocent and pure heart. Loved "Iam coming with your Rini did into your life", "You are her little sister, and mine too"!! All that he didn't do with Rini, he has now done with Dhaatri... he brought his proposal for her approval, passed the test, and received the 'Yes'!! Now she is going to play a prank on her Rini didi, hehahaa!!

    Dhaatri rebels against Disha's attitude, which irks her more... sad to see the gap in their relationship widening. "Rini's bridge was too short to bridge the gap"...is a very profound statement.

    Beautiful update... loved the attachment formed between Vinit and Dhaatri!!

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  9. Loved "Ghaas he nahi dal rahi thi, toh yeh ghada kya kartha, he said sulking", haahaahaa... calling himself a 'ghada'!!

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