The guests were
filing in. Baarat had not reached. Ravi went inside and Salil greeted him.
“I just came to see
everything is fine here...!” Ravi said taking a look around and seemed
satisfied with the preparations. Salil
looked at him anxiously and Ravi nodded with a smile.
“I am Bhanu’s
cousin...!” he said further. Salil
looked around to call Nilima. “They sent
me here ahead to see everything is ok...!” he said smiling and took out an
envelope.
“They have sent this....Demand
list...!” he said seriously and Salil’s mouth went dry. “Rini...!” he called out hoarsely. Ravi was watching him. Someone yelled “Rini..” Rini came to her
papa. She looked at him questioningly
carrying a pile of bags in her hand.
“Ravi... Bhanu’s
cousin.... “ He held out the envelope. Rini
looked at Ravi. “Bh...Bhanu has sent
this....!” Salil completed.
“Demand list...!”
Ravi added pointing at the envelope.
Rini looked shocked. Ravi stared.
“I want the reply...! Before the Baarat comes to the gates....~~” he
said folding his arms on his chest. Rini
looked at her Papa’s ashen face...
“Yes. Ok.
Please be seated... Have something... she picked up two cold drink glasses
from the nearby table and smiling pleasantly, offered it to Ravi and her Papa...!”
“I will handle
it...!” she whispered and her Papa sat on the chair. Ravi still was gazing at Rini with
suspicion. Rini gave him a smile and
said...
“I will just read the
demand list and get back to you... Please be comfortable...” Ravi took a step
ahead glancing at Salil.
“I want the reply
now...!” He glared at Rini to get the same glare in return. “Open the envelope now!” he almost ordered
and Rini clenched her fists.
“Have you come
alone... or you have others to carry you back..!” she gritted her teeth.
“What do you mean?”
he asked aggressively. Salil
Intervened. He tried to take the
envelope from her.
“Rini... Let us see
the demand list...!” he said in a shaky voice.
Rini glared at Ravi.
“Would you please
come with me...? We need to talk..!” she said with mock politeness. Time to show her military avatar...!! Ravi
shrugged.
“Fine..!” he
said. “Papa... you stay here...!” she
ordered pushing her Papa into the chair and beckoned Ravi inside.
“Open it!” he again
demanded. She tore open the envelope in
rage and saw what was written.
“Uncle,
I am sorry we could not meet. I was held up in some urgent matters. I wanted to meet you and talk to you...!
I am sorry we could not meet. I was held up in some urgent matters. I wanted to meet you and talk to you...!
I promise, Disha will
be happy with me...! This wedding with rituals is my family’s demand, I couldn’t
say NO to them...!
I am sending Ravi
with this note. Please accept my little contribution...
Uncle, it is from a Son and not from a Son-In-Law..!
Yours,
Bhanu...!”
There was a cheque of
ten lacs with the note. Rini looked up
shocked and Ravi winked grinning..!!
“Just a little prank ...!”
he said and Rini grinned back looking relieved.
She folded the note, inserted the cheque back into the envelope and
keeping the envelope back on Ravi’s palm said... “He is the greatest person we
will have in our family...”
“Thank you Bhanu
bhayya....!” she kept the note with her.
“Please tell him, we are all waiting for him ....!” she turned her face
to hide her moist eyes. Ravi turned.
“And.. This... for
Disha! Maasi has sent it...!” he said taking out a box. She opened it. Four studded bangles glittered.
“come... !” she
beckoned him towards Disha’s room.
“No... I am not
supposed to meet her... Thats not in the plan!” he said grinning and turning to
her...
“Hey...you want this
to continue or...?” he asked pointing at Salil.
“No..! Please!” she
pleaded smiling. “I will give this to
him.!” She showed the note. “Ok. Then!
Meet you with the Baarat...!” Ravi marched out of the hall to everyone’s
shock. Rini couldn’t stop her grin. She showed the note to Salil and he broke
down, relieved.
Dhatri came in
hurriedly. “That gudda... I mean... man,
why did he go back?” she asked avoiding to take his name.
“Nothing, Dhaa! He
had come with some message for Papa!” Rini said grinning and Salil nodded. “He is Bhanu’s cousin...!” Salil said patting
on her back and she went back to her duty.
Baarat had reached
the gates and there was suddenly a bustle to welcome the baaratees....! Nilima
was ready with Aarti Thali. Rini was
running around. Dhaa had vanished seeing
the crowd. Ragini, Purva and Suresh were
ahead of everyone to welcome the baarat.
“Laxmibai..?” Rini looked around for her.
“Dhaa... Laxumbai...!”
she called out and Dhaa ran towards the store room.
“Laxumbai.. you go...
baarat has come.. mamma is calling you... I will be here...!” Dhaa said panting
and Laxumbai looked shocked.
“Me? Why?” she asked
bewildered. “Why? Who is going to
welcome the guests?” Dhaa asked angrily.
Rini had systematically sidelined Maasi Maa who was wandering with sulky
face with nothing to do. No one had
bothered to talk to her.
“Chalo, Laxumbai...”
Dhatri took her by hand and dragged her to the gates.
“Here... Laxumbai...!”
she brought her ahead with Nilima and Nilima gave her the Aarti Thali.... !! Laxumbai
held it with Shaky hands overwhelmed with the honour she was given. Dayal Kaka was standing with Salil welcoming
the Baaratees...!! Dhatri ran back to
the stores .... Someone had be there...!! She was at peace. She opened a container to stuff laddu in her
mouth.
.......
“Are you trying to
impress me?” Dharini asked Ravi to find him always around, helping her in
whatever she was doing.
“Yes!” he said she
looked up at his face to find him gazing somewhere else. She looked in the direction where his eyes
were fixed. Her eyebrows vanished in her
forehead to find Dhatri moving with the container towards the store. She again brought her gaze back to Ravi to
find his eyes following Dhatri.
“Oh Ho!” she thought
grinning.
“Ok! I am
impressed...!” she said loudly looking at him curiously and he brought his gaze
back to her reluctantly.
“Umm... Can you take
these bags to the store room, please?” she asked smiling sweetly and he nodded
snatching the bags from her hurriedly.
“Interesting...!” she
grinned rolling her eyes with this new development.
“Rini.. !” someone
called her frantically and she turned to attend to the caller.
Ravi dashed to the
store room to find Dhatri with her friends giggling and whispering. They suddenly stopped seeing him at the
door. Dhatri turned to keep the
container in the shelf and he said...
“Wait... let me help
you!”
“No need!” she said
and Ragini came forward eyeing him to take the bags from his hands.
“I will keep
these...!” she said smiling at him.
“So sweet of you..!”
he kept his hand on her shoulder and Dhatri rolled her eyes....!
“Ragini, will you
arrange these things neatly? With his help, please?” Dhatri too was very sweet
and Ragini jumped at it at once.
“Yes... I will tidy
these things... don’t worry!” she looked at Ravi expectantly and he agreed
smiling at her.
“Yeah...! Let us do
it..!” he said grinning at Dhatri and she barged out mouthing a bad
word...!! He lost interest in the store
room.
“Excuse me!” he said
going out of the room clutching his phone to his ear. Ragini waited for him to return sitting on
the nearby chair dreamily. Purva had no
interest .... she had busied herself in constantly talking to her boyfriend
over the phone. He was to meet her at
the gates in the evening. She was asking
Suresh to take her snaps and was sending them to him. The crowd had settled and were discussing in
groups. The so called rituals were going
on. Dhatri watched on frowning... labeling
each one with price tag... ! People were
enjoying cold drinks and tit-bits...!!
Everyone had found out a group to discuss and laugh. Ravi was busy showing something from his
mobile and everyone was laughing their hearts out.
“Hey, Dharini...!” he
called out and Rini stopped. She came
near to have a look at the mobile and tried to hide her giggle. He had recorded the Demand List episode....!
“Yeah... you people
gave us a 1000 volts shock..!” Rini joined them. “Look at Papa... He is drained out
completely...!” she said looking at Ravi.
Ravi looked at the video.
“Hey... No offence...
It was just a prank... Sorry!” he said looking at her.
“Never mind....!” she
was a sport...! He looked at her curiously.
“Ravi...” someone
called out. “You are wanted... Bhanu...!”
Ravi dashed to the stage to find Dhatri and Purva giggling with Suresh. They had no work, just wandering and pass the
remarks and giggle for no reason.
“Someone at the
gate...” The security guard was on the stage and Bhanu looked up at Ravi. “For Ray D..Dav...!” The guard said and Ravi
dashed out towards the gates. Dhatri’s
eyes followed Ravi.
“Now what is he up
to?” she muttered angrily narrowing her eyes to take a better look at the
persons he was talking to outside the Hall.
“Wait a minute...”
she left her gang in puzzle and moved towards the entrance.
“Appa?..... Appa..!!”
she screamed breaking into a run raising her lehenga and clutching her chunary.
“Appa...!” she
screamed standing at the entrance and a middle aged skinny person with white dhoti and
kurta turned....!
“Appa...!” she glided
and he pulled her in a tight embrace.
“Baby...!” he kissed
her head. She wrapped her arms around
him. Everyone from the hall turned to
watch the drama. Ravi stood folding his
arms. Dhatri looked at the person accompanying
Appa and blurted... “Pant man!” Ravi stifled his smile and looked at the other
person.
“Appa... Come...!”
she pulled his hand and he raised his other hand to hit her. She ducked pressing her hands on her head
defensively.
“No! Work with
Saab...!”he said waiving at Ravi.
“Saab?” she
gaped. Ravi and Teacher, the pant man
were deep into discussion. Dhatri pulled
Appa aside.
“What? What work?”
she asked in a bare whisper. He pulled
her closer...
“Its all because of
you... Baby... you are our savoir ...! You brought Saab to us...” he kissed her
again. She wiped her cheek angrily. “No Kissi..!” he slapped on her head
fondly.
“Come inside...” she
dragged him inside with her, leaving the teacher and Ravi to their
discussion. Appa looked around awkwardly
... reluctant to enter. She pulled
him. The crowd watched on. She didn’t bother. Appa gasped looking at the glitter and decorations
everywhere.
“Baby... No!” he
pulled her back afraid of going into that crowd. Dhatri was not ready to leave him. Appa’s black face flushed. He was out of place there in that urban crowd
with his so called white dhoti with a soil tinge, his dirty kurta and a green
towel tied around his head.....! Anyone would have passed him as a beggar. Everyone looked at Appa and Dhatri curiously.
Dhatri pulled him inside clutching his
arm... She had found her family member....! She was at home...!
ReplyDeleteHello everyone,
Thank you again for your beautiful comments. Hope you like this one too!!
Divya, thank you very much. And its good that you withhold your comments about Disha. Soon you will know her side too...!
Nisha, Thanks a lot. Yeah.. Ray is here and Dhaa sure will get some real shocks...
Me:P. Thank you for the comment. Ray and Dhaa in arena now...! let us see what happens..!!
Aparna, thanks a lot! Yes they met second time... and with a lot of fire works...! hehehe Yes Disha is married legally in US.
Mymind... Thanks! Bang on! Bhanu is a gentleman... Disha too is not bad, only a tactless girl thats all...! Let us see what she wants to prove...! And this Khushi F thing is my son’s kidagiri... he changed the login name... and I don’t know, how to revert it back..!
Thanks once again for the wonderful comments...
Love
KF
WOW di!What an update!So,Ravi is trying to pave way to get to dhaa through Rini?Well,I guess,he was smitten by her from the beginning itself!His little prank literally gave heart attack to poor Salil and it was a treat to read!Wish,all grooms and their familieswere just as understanding and practical as Bhanu in India!Please continue soon with your amazing work!
ReplyDeleteLove
I liked the prank. I had an inkling something like this would come up as Bhanu's family is also shown very genuine. What is Disha's story?
ReplyDeleteWonderful update...Ravi has made up his mind...and knows exactly who should be pocketed first for his mission "Dhaa"....Target main achieved but what about the first and foremost...the tigress herself....more difficult when a person has decided not to fall or may be admit the fall...even when already in the ditch!....he has brought her home to her...Loved reading the interactions between Rini and Ravi.....you are not going to combine names Dhaa and Ravi...right?...it ends in a slum..hehehe!
ReplyDeleteCurious why Ravi meeting Disha was not in the plan?
Hey...thanks for revealing the kidagiri behind your id change..woh kya hai ki "Khushifan" is already imprinted so deep now..was surprised to see the change...
ReplyDeletewonderful update...nice prank..he he...almost gave Salil attack ;)
ReplyDeleteliked interaction between rini n ray..
curious to know what happens next....
update soon.....
yours,
Me :P
Awesome update jiji :)
ReplyDeleteHope will get to knw Disha better.
Glad Bhanu has sense to support his in-laws... nice guy :) Ray is so cute...
Vini is nt attending wedding!!!
Thanks for the new update :)
Lots of Love,
Divya
Hi Khushifan!!
ReplyDeleteWhat a drama enacted by Ravi... and Rini and her father were at the receiving end... good memories for the future. Such a magnanimous gesture by Bhanu, without Disha's knowledge and again Laxumbai given the role of a family elder was a beautiful gesture!!
Hahaaha, Ravi's eyes were following Dhaatri, but he was following Rini impressing her... and again, that was a great tussle between the two. How much Dhaatri feels at home with Appa, and not with the 'price tag' crowd!! She brought Ravi to her family as their saviour, and now he brought her family to her!!! Poor Appa, he feels like a misfit in this crowd!!
Lovely long update, and interesting happenings in the course of the wedding... thoroughly enjoyed it!!