Monday, 24 February 2014

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“Man... That was close!” Jorden said with a sigh.  D’amama sat with a thud and Winfree grinned. 
“She is out..!” Winfree said hoarsely and Jorden looked at him in wild surprise... “You alright... Aain?” he asked ruffling Winfree’s hair.  Winfree grinned.

“You think, she managed?” asked D’amama unsure.  Jorden looked at her tentatively. 
“I go see....!” Winfree got up from the bed.

“No... Wait.. I see..!” D’amama dashed out of Block II 23.  

“Yeah... That was close...!” Winfree grinned and flung his arms around Jorden...!
D’amama moved towards the Lab in the seventh floor. 

“Hey... hey... You can’t!” the security guard stopped her.

“Aiiann... wha? You stopping me?” She raised her voice ready to pounce on him.

“Shuu... stop yelling...!” The guard looked around.  A group of visitors moved in.  D’amama took this for her advantage...!

“You stopping me? My boy is inside...! I wanna see him...!” she pushed the guard.  The other guards approached for help.  She was all set to create the scene... ! The visitors stopped to look.  The guards were in a fix.

“We have a strict security...!” Dr. Bridge leading the group said meekly.  The guard moved away and D’amama squeezed herself in, moved ahead of the group...! The guard looked on helplessly. D’amama took a sigh of relief.

“Girl... !” she opened the room again...calling out in a hushed voice. 

“No response?” she walked inside.  The room was empty.  “Ainn... girl?” she called out little loudly.  She heard no response.  She breathed relief... Coming out, closing the door behind securely, she went back.  Smile and satisfaction appeared on her face.  

She had seen the girl was carried by the nurse...! D’amama had followed suspiciously and when Dhatri was carried out of Block II, 29, she lost her temper.

“Ainn.... Wha are you giving my boy?” she had raised her voice...! The nurse had stopped.  Paramedics continued to push Dhatri ...! 

“Man... Maa Boy... !” D’amama started off animatedly taking out her phone, keeping one eye on where Dhatri was carried.

“Quiet please..!” the nurse requested.  D’amama was not to be stopped.  “I wanna to talk to head...!” she screamed hysterically.  The nurse looked confused.  D’amama had already dialled her brother’s number sensing danger.  The nurse drove her away, out of the Block.

“Ainn... They took her away, in that death lab...!” she whispered in the phone, and ran towards her boy.  Winfree was waiting eagerly.

“Ainn... they took her somewhere...!” D’amama informed and the boy broke into action.
“I go and see...” he said huskily.  They both ran back to the elevator...!

“Ainn... Jorden... seventh floor...!” she again dialled.  Her brother was on his way.  She must stop the persons from moving Dhatri into the lab.  

“Ainn...” Where is the head?” she asked raising her voice gathering enough attention.  The group of visitors turned to see.  She grabbed the chance.

“Ainn... My boy... Not well... and you not attending...! No medicine?” she yelled and Winfree grinned.  

“Yeah.. no medicine...” he murmured gurgling...! D’amama had gathered crowd by then and was shouting for not treating her son properly.  Winfree saw Dhatri being pushed into a room and broke away from his mother merging into the crowd.  D’amama created a scene and Winfree reached the room running and hopping.

“Shuu... stop shouting..!” a stout paramedic yelled over the murmuring crowd.  D’amama turned to the crowd.

“You asking me to stop? Where is the head man? I wanna to talk to the head.. right now...!” she said stomping and the ward in charge came hurriedly with the security guards.  D’amama saw the in charge and charged on him...!

“Ainn... where are you man... these people... your people neglecting maa child...!” she yelled holding his collar.  He was taken aback.  She badly needed some support... and she got one in the form of her brother. Jorden. Within no time he assessed the situation and took out his gun...!


“Whats going on?” he brandished the gun... The security guards closed in...!

“Whey is that man?” he looked around for the in charge and saw his sister waving towards some direction.  He vanished amidst the commotion his sister created successfully, yelling and shouting...! The group of visitor seemed to have frozen in shock.  The incharge gestured the security guards and they closed in on D’amama.  She yelled and shouted being thrown out of the ward and then shrugging her dress contemptuously, moved twards Block II, 23.  

Jorden pushed open the door to find his nephew trying to tear the straps.  He dashed in to help.
“Hey.... wake up...!” Winfree patted on Dhatri’s cheeks.  She had gone into nothingness. 

 Jorden picked up the water jug and tipped it upside down on her face.  She shuddered blinking open her eyes.

“Girl...!” he freed her hurriedly.  “Escape! Run... girl... for your life” he helped her sit up, hearing the closing in footsteps.  

“Run...!” Winfree held her hand smiling faintly at her.  She hopped out of the bed.  The footsteps neared... Thrusting a gun in her hand, Jorden dashed out with Winfree, to create more commotion to give Dhatri enough time to escape...!” 

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D’amama came back to Winfree.  Jorden had already left.  “Hope she is alright...!” she said holding the cross hung around her neck. 

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What’s going on?” she asked the nurse moving hurriedly.  She looked at D’amama...
“Where were you?” she asked angrily.  D’amama gestured at the rest room.

“Damn...! Dr. Bridge came in to check your son...!” she said and D’amama smiled contemptuously.  

“Ainn... where is he?” she asked looking concerned.  

“He will be back in the evening...tomorrow!” said the nurse...!

“Whats the commotion..?” D’amama . asked.  “Some girl escaped...” the nurse said moving away.  D’amama couldn’t hide her grin...

“God!” she clutched the cross.   

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Rini dashed to seventh, left middle... and pushed open the door of the specious lab.
“Dhaa...?” she took out her gun...!

“Dhaa....!” she raised her voice.  No response... She moved into the room searching.  There was nothing except the bed... torn out strapps, the gantry of the MRI machine.. A table with a switch board with clamps attached to it...! She flushed herself to the floor to search under the tables and equipments...

“Nothing!~” Dhatri had vanished...! There was nothing inside.  Rini dashed out... and froze.  The visiting group had reached the door.  She hurriedly hid her gun in her jeans and looked straight not affected by the group at all.  She glanced at the tall figure accompanying and her heart leapt out.  “Vinit...!” she wanted to cry... 

Vinit showed no recognition on his face...! A nurse pulled her aside hurriedly throwing the lab door open.  The group entered.  The person in charge explained ... showing the equipments.  Vinit stayed behind...

“She escaped...!” Rini murmured and Vinit lip read her message turning his gaze inside the lab...!
Rini ran back to the ground floor... “What?” Aidy asked with bated breath... 

“She escaped... we got to find her out!” Rini said in a bear whisper.  All the exit routes flashing before her eyes!  There was no exit without Security check.  “Is she still inside?” Rini’s heart twisted with pain.  “Dhaa... be safe...!” she prayed hard. 

“Ravi?” she looked around.  

“He made his way inside with Jim.. They are in control room...!” Aidy went out hurriedly pressing Rini on the bed.  “Stay here!” she warned.  Rini nodded...!

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“Hey...!” Aidy was in control room.  Jim looked up startled... Aidy looked into the numerous screens...  She scanned the Location bands... “Look here... she was kept in this block...!” she showed then Block II, 29.  Jim rewound the footage... They could see a lady and a boy sitting on Dhatri’s bed with her.  “She looks comfortable with them...! Look.. the boy is hugging her...!” Jim exclaimed.  Ravi couldn’t take his eyes off the screen... “Dhut Teri..!” his heart twisted...! 

“Look... They are moving her bed....!” Aidy brought them back on the screen...! They looked on.... Jim froze all the cameras... running in slow motion they could see her carried out of the block... but then the elevator and she just vanished.  No camera captured her....! Ravi looked grave.  

“Where did they take her?” he turned to Aidy.  

“Dr. Scott’s Lab... Seventh floor, Left side, Middle ...!” she gave them the location.  Jim and Ravi gaped at each other...! Then frantically searching in the screens..!

“No... No surveillance there...!” Aidy said gravely.  Ravi pushed his chair getting up.  Jim had already reached the door.

“Wait I will take you there...!” she offered and both of them agreed....! 


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“Awaaa.... Mamma....!” Dhatri winced in pain.  She couldn’t see anything...! The suffocating smell gases made her dizzy.  She coughed hard... She had to hold her breath...for being deprived of oxygen...! She tried to figure out., straining her eyes in darkness...! something very cold metallic shivered her...! 

“What?” she tried to feel it in the darkness...!

“A gun?” she held it in her hand gripping it tightly and putting her finger on the trigger..!
“Loaded?” she didn’t know.  She should unload it and see or fire a shot and check...! She couldn’t do either of them...! She crawled further... 

"What... is all this?" she felt the papers... something leathery soft touched...! She felt it and then moving her hand around gathered the papers...! 

“What?” a muffled scream left her mouth.... the floor had started moving suddenly...! She screamed for help... in vain... there was no one to help her. She shoud help herself...! She was moving fast, downwards... She tried to crawl against the movement... upwards... Thud... she had reached the deadend.... the floor still was moving pulling her backwards... She tried to hold on to something which was not moving, which was fixed... There was nothing...!

“Mari mai... help me!” She clutched the Kirthimukh praying hard, holding on to the floor which was moving faster...!

“Vehicle?” She didn’t know what it was.  She tried to kick the sides feeling the solid walls all around...! 

“Where am I?” Tunnel?” she tried to feel the other end... there was no light... even the faintest...!
“No...!” She concluded... She touched the material moving along with her...!

“Filth... She couldn’t recognise anything....! Something very filthy, smelly, wet, damp was moving with her...! 

“Buke.. buke... she vomited with that nauseating smell...Awaaa... She wiped her mouth with the back of her hand...! She got pricks from everywhere...! 

“What is this?” she held on to it.  It felt like an handle... She hung propelling herself, holding that handle for her life.  

“What is this? Handle? There must be a door nob...!” she ran her fingers around to feel the door nob...! 

“Awaaa... the entire tunnel filled with suffocating smell....! She couldn’t breathe... Dizziness engulfed...!



14 comments:

  1. Hello,

    Sorry for the delay... Guests... plus mental block... ! :(
    Will update regularly...! Hope you like this update...!
    Please comment whether you liked it or not..
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  2. Ok its getting confusing now...harder for us to guess whats gonna happene next or where dhaa is actually.. so u have to update sooner :D good job with the story!!

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    1. Hi Anonymous, thank you for the comment... yes it is confusing... till the smoke of confusion gets cleared. Hope i am not adding to your confusion with the new update...!

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  3. Is she in some drainage tunnel or vent? A bit confused--- Now all are searching for her in different parts of the hospital and she might end up outside the hospital premises?? Waiting for the next update :)

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    1. Let us see what it is and what happens to Dhatri when she reaches the other end..!
      Thank you for the comment...!

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  4. the scenes are quite mixing up within themselves..i will wait for the next update for it to clear out.

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    1. hihihihahaha... you keeping me in suspense... I keep you in suspense... Tit for Tat...!

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  5. No light at the end of the tunnel...neither for Dhaa nor for her rescuers nor for us!....Waiting for the torch light wala update...

    You having mental block??!!!...you have the most fascinating story lines ...and if at all you have one...let it go choomantar...

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    1. Mental block cleared...! Now its your turn to scratch your head ... What will happen to her... !
      hehehehawhawhaw

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  6. Like the update but the suspense is killing :)

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    1. hehehe... bear with the suspense for next update...!
      Thank you aparna

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  7. Great update - Dhaa is stuck in a sewer of some sort? Hope one of the team finds her soon before she suffocates. So lucky that Dhaa found D'amama and Winifred - they put their lives at risk to help her get away. At least they know she is somewhere in the building. Waiting for the next update. Hope your mental block clears soon. Just go play with Floyd - pets are great mental unblockers :)

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    1. Thank you starlight for your words... mental block cleared... all set to block your minds...

      Floyd is always in the hyper active mode...! I am losing weight while he is gaining exponentially...!
      hehehe!

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  8. Hi Khushifan!!

    Again, very interesting update!! Everyone moving to the seventh floor lab!! D'amama gets the applause hands down... what a scene she creates, complete with histrionics!!! See, dramebaazi does have its advantages too!! She got away with it now, 'cos of the visitors' presence... but later, would she come under suspicion??

    Ahh, Ravi's heart twisted saying "Dhut Teri"!!

    Dhaatri has escaped.... loved the way you have described her perceptions of the place and her conditon... excellent!! Whether it is a waste disposal chute or the laundry chute, and now she is holding onto another opening to another room??!!

    Loved the update.... what a havoc she has created..... everyone in a tizzy!!

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