“Man...
That was close!” Jorden said with a sigh.
D’amama sat with a thud and Winfree grinned.
“She
is out..!” Winfree said hoarsely and Jorden looked at him in wild surprise...
“You alright... Aain?” he asked ruffling Winfree’s hair. Winfree grinned.
“You
think, she managed?” asked D’amama unsure.
Jorden looked at her tentatively.
“I
go see....!” Winfree got up from the bed.
“No...
Wait.. I see..!” D’amama dashed out of Block II 23.
“Yeah...
That was close...!” Winfree grinned and flung his arms around Jorden...!
D’amama
moved towards the Lab in the seventh floor.
“Hey...
hey... You can’t!” the security guard stopped her.
“Aiiann...
wha? You stopping me?” She raised her voice ready to pounce on him.
“Shuu...
stop yelling...!” The guard looked around.
A group of visitors moved in.
D’amama took this for her advantage...!
“You
stopping me? My boy is inside...! I wanna see him...!” she pushed the
guard. The other guards approached for
help. She was all set to create the
scene... ! The visitors stopped to look.
The guards were in a fix.
“We
have a strict security...!” Dr. Bridge leading the group said meekly. The guard moved away and D’amama squeezed
herself in, moved ahead of the group...! The guard looked on helplessly.
D’amama took a sigh of relief.
“Girl...
!” she opened the room again...calling out in a hushed voice.
“No
response?” she walked inside. The room
was empty. “Ainn... girl?” she called
out little loudly. She heard no
response. She breathed relief... Coming
out, closing the door behind securely, she went back. Smile and satisfaction appeared on her
face.
She had seen the girl
was carried by the nurse...! D’amama had followed suspiciously and when Dhatri
was carried out of Block II, 29, she lost her temper.
“Ainn.... Wha are you
giving my boy?” she had raised her voice...! The nurse had stopped. Paramedics continued to push Dhatri ...!
“Man... Maa Boy... !”
D’amama started off animatedly taking out her phone, keeping one eye on where
Dhatri was carried.
“Quiet please..!” the
nurse requested. D’amama was not to be
stopped. “I wanna to talk to head...!”
she screamed hysterically. The nurse
looked confused. D’amama had already dialled
her brother’s number sensing danger. The
nurse drove her away, out of the Block.
“Ainn... They took
her away, in that death lab...!” she whispered in the phone, and ran towards
her boy. Winfree was waiting eagerly.
“Ainn... they took
her somewhere...!” D’amama informed and the boy broke into action.
“I go and see...” he
said huskily. They both ran back to the
elevator...!
“Ainn... Jorden...
seventh floor...!” she again dialled. Her
brother was on his way. She must stop
the persons from moving Dhatri into the lab.
“Ainn...” Where is
the head?” she asked raising her voice gathering enough attention. The group of visitors turned to see. She grabbed the chance.
“Ainn... My boy...
Not well... and you not attending...! No medicine?” she yelled and Winfree
grinned.
“Yeah.. no
medicine...” he murmured gurgling...! D’amama had gathered crowd by then and
was shouting for not treating her son properly.
Winfree saw Dhatri being pushed into a room and broke away from his
mother merging into the crowd. D’amama
created a scene and Winfree reached the room running and hopping.
“Shuu... stop
shouting..!” a stout paramedic yelled over the murmuring crowd. D’amama turned to the crowd.
“You asking me to
stop? Where is the head man? I wanna to talk to the head.. right now...!” she
said stomping and the ward in charge came hurriedly with the security
guards. D’amama saw the in charge and
charged on him...!
“Ainn... where are
you man... these people... your people neglecting maa child...!” she yelled
holding his collar. He was taken
aback. She badly needed some support...
and she got one in the form of her brother. Jorden. Within no time he assessed
the situation and took out his gun...!
“Whats going on?” he
brandished the gun... The security guards closed in...!
“Whey is that man?”
he looked around for the in charge and saw his sister waving towards some
direction. He vanished amidst the
commotion his sister created successfully, yelling and shouting...! The group
of visitor seemed to have frozen in shock.
The incharge gestured the security guards and they closed in on D’amama. She yelled and shouted being thrown out of
the ward and then shrugging her dress contemptuously, moved twards Block II,
23.
Jorden pushed open
the door to find his nephew trying to tear the straps. He dashed in to help.
“Hey.... wake up...!”
Winfree patted on Dhatri’s cheeks. She
had gone into nothingness.
Jorden picked
up the water jug and tipped it upside down on her face. She shuddered blinking open her eyes.
“Girl...!” he freed
her hurriedly. “Escape! Run... girl...
for your life” he helped her sit up, hearing the closing in footsteps.
“Run...!” Winfree
held her hand smiling faintly at her.
She hopped out of the bed. The
footsteps neared... Thrusting a gun in her hand, Jorden dashed out with
Winfree, to create more commotion to give Dhatri enough time to escape...!”
...................
D’amama
came back to Winfree. Jorden had already
left. “Hope she is alright...!” she said
holding the cross hung around her neck.
****** ******
********
What’s
going on?” she asked the nurse moving hurriedly. She looked at D’amama...
“Where
were you?” she asked angrily. D’amama
gestured at the rest room.
“Damn...!
Dr. Bridge came in to check your son...!” she said and D’amama smiled
contemptuously.
“Ainn...
where is he?” she asked looking concerned.
“He
will be back in the evening...tomorrow!” said the nurse...!
“Whats
the commotion..?” D’amama . asked. “Some
girl escaped...” the nurse said moving away.
D’amama couldn’t hide her grin...
“God!”
she clutched the cross.
.................... .........
Rini
dashed to seventh, left middle... and pushed open the door of the specious lab.
“Dhaa...?”
she took out her gun...!
“Dhaa....!”
she raised her voice. No response... She
moved into the room searching. There was
nothing except the bed... torn out strapps, the gantry of the MRI machine.. A
table with a switch board with clamps attached to it...! She flushed herself to
the floor to search under the tables and equipments...
“Nothing!~”
Dhatri had vanished...! There was nothing inside. Rini dashed out... and froze. The visiting group had reached the door. She hurriedly hid her gun in her jeans and
looked straight not affected by the group at all. She glanced at the tall figure accompanying
and her heart leapt out. “Vinit...!” she
wanted to cry...
Vinit
showed no recognition on his face...! A nurse pulled her aside hurriedly
throwing the lab door open. The group
entered. The person in charge explained
... showing the equipments. Vinit stayed
behind...
“She
escaped...!” Rini murmured and Vinit lip read her message turning his gaze
inside the lab...!
Rini
ran back to the ground floor... “What?” Aidy asked with bated breath...
“She
escaped... we got to find her out!” Rini said in a bear whisper. All the exit routes flashing before her eyes! There was no exit without Security
check. “Is she still inside?” Rini’s
heart twisted with pain. “Dhaa... be
safe...!” she prayed hard.
“Ravi?”
she looked around.
“He
made his way inside with Jim.. They are in control room...!” Aidy went out
hurriedly pressing Rini on the bed.
“Stay here!” she warned. Rini
nodded...!
.............
“Hey...!”
Aidy was in control room. Jim looked up
startled... Aidy looked into the numerous screens... She scanned the Location bands... “Look
here... she was kept in this block...!” she showed then Block II, 29. Jim rewound the footage... They could see a
lady and a boy sitting on Dhatri’s bed with her. “She looks comfortable with them...! Look..
the boy is hugging her...!” Jim exclaimed.
Ravi couldn’t take his eyes off the screen... “Dhut Teri..!” his heart
twisted...!
“Look...
They are moving her bed....!” Aidy brought them back on the screen...! They
looked on.... Jim froze all the cameras... running in slow motion they could
see her carried out of the block... but then the elevator and she just
vanished. No camera captured her....!
Ravi looked grave.
“Where
did they take her?” he turned to Aidy.
“Dr.
Scott’s Lab... Seventh floor, Left side, Middle ...!” she gave them the
location. Jim and Ravi gaped at each
other...! Then frantically searching in the screens..!
“No...
No surveillance there...!” Aidy said gravely.
Ravi pushed his chair getting up.
Jim had already reached the door.
“Wait
I will take you there...!” she offered and both of them agreed....!
********** ********
“Awaaa....
Mamma....!” Dhatri winced in pain. She
couldn’t see anything...! The suffocating smell gases made her dizzy. She coughed hard... She had to hold her
breath...for being deprived of oxygen...! She tried to figure out., straining
her eyes in darkness...! something very cold metallic shivered her...!
“What?”
she tried to feel it in the darkness...!
“A
gun?” she held it in her hand gripping it tightly and putting her finger on the
trigger..!
“Loaded?”
she didn’t know. She should unload it
and see or fire a shot and check...! She couldn’t do either of them...! She
crawled further...
"What... is all this?" she felt the papers... something leathery soft touched...! She felt it and then moving her hand around gathered the papers...!
“What?”
a muffled scream left her mouth.... the floor had started moving suddenly...!
She screamed for help... in vain... there was no one to help her. She shoud
help herself...! She was moving fast, downwards... She tried to crawl against
the movement... upwards... Thud... she had reached the deadend.... the floor
still was moving pulling her backwards... She tried to hold on to something
which was not moving, which was fixed... There was nothing...!
“Mari
mai... help me!” She clutched the Kirthimukh praying hard, holding on to the
floor which was moving faster...!
“Vehicle?”
She didn’t know what it was. She tried
to kick the sides feeling the solid walls all around...!
“Where
am I?” Tunnel?” she tried to feel the other end... there was no light... even
the faintest...!
“No...!”
She concluded... She touched the material moving along with her...!
“Filth...
She couldn’t recognise anything....! Something very filthy, smelly, wet, damp
was moving with her...!
“Buke..
buke... she vomited with that nauseating smell...Awaaa... She wiped her mouth
with the back of her hand...! She got pricks from everywhere...!
“What
is this?” she held on to it. It felt
like an handle... She hung propelling herself, holding that handle for her
life.
“What
is this? Handle? There must be a door nob...!” she ran her fingers around to
feel the door nob...!
“Awaaa...
the entire tunnel filled with suffocating smell....! She couldn’t breathe...
Dizziness engulfed...!
Hello,
ReplyDeleteSorry for the delay... Guests... plus mental block... ! :(
Will update regularly...! Hope you like this update...!
Please comment whether you liked it or not..
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Ok its getting confusing now...harder for us to guess whats gonna happene next or where dhaa is actually.. so u have to update sooner :D good job with the story!!
ReplyDeleteHi Anonymous, thank you for the comment... yes it is confusing... till the smoke of confusion gets cleared. Hope i am not adding to your confusion with the new update...!
DeleteIs she in some drainage tunnel or vent? A bit confused--- Now all are searching for her in different parts of the hospital and she might end up outside the hospital premises?? Waiting for the next update :)
ReplyDeleteLet us see what it is and what happens to Dhatri when she reaches the other end..!
DeleteThank you for the comment...!
the scenes are quite mixing up within themselves..i will wait for the next update for it to clear out.
ReplyDeletehihihihahaha... you keeping me in suspense... I keep you in suspense... Tit for Tat...!
DeleteNo light at the end of the tunnel...neither for Dhaa nor for her rescuers nor for us!....Waiting for the torch light wala update...
ReplyDeleteYou having mental block??!!!...you have the most fascinating story lines ...and if at all you have one...let it go choomantar...
Mental block cleared...! Now its your turn to scratch your head ... What will happen to her... !
Deletehehehehawhawhaw
Like the update but the suspense is killing :)
ReplyDeletehehehe... bear with the suspense for next update...!
DeleteThank you aparna
Great update - Dhaa is stuck in a sewer of some sort? Hope one of the team finds her soon before she suffocates. So lucky that Dhaa found D'amama and Winifred - they put their lives at risk to help her get away. At least they know she is somewhere in the building. Waiting for the next update. Hope your mental block clears soon. Just go play with Floyd - pets are great mental unblockers :)
ReplyDeleteThank you starlight for your words... mental block cleared... all set to block your minds...
DeleteFloyd is always in the hyper active mode...! I am losing weight while he is gaining exponentially...!
hehehe!
Hi Khushifan!!
ReplyDeleteAgain, very interesting update!! Everyone moving to the seventh floor lab!! D'amama gets the applause hands down... what a scene she creates, complete with histrionics!!! See, dramebaazi does have its advantages too!! She got away with it now, 'cos of the visitors' presence... but later, would she come under suspicion??
Ahh, Ravi's heart twisted saying "Dhut Teri"!!
Dhaatri has escaped.... loved the way you have described her perceptions of the place and her conditon... excellent!! Whether it is a waste disposal chute or the laundry chute, and now she is holding onto another opening to another room??!!
Loved the update.... what a havoc she has created..... everyone in a tizzy!!