She was sliding faster, uncontrolled with nothing to hang
on..! The dizziness engulfed...!
“Dhatri..... Dhatri...!” someone was banging inside her
head...! “Awaa.... Umm....!” she groaned in pain breathing shallow. The gascious smoke and the filth covered
her... She desperately struggled to hang on to something, which was not
moving...!
She hit the ground with a thud and to her shock the
ground was moving...! She touched the solid walls... the temperature was rising
and the air was unbreatheable...! She coughed hard spitting the filth from her
mouth... ! Her right hand clutched the gun tightly...!
“I won’t die...! I will fight...!” she spat again, this
time her rage! The vibrations were
unbearable...! She turned and crawled upstream... in opposite direction...! The
temperature was rising... She was being pulled along with the filth
forcefully..!
“No...!” she turned again thudding her hands on the side
walls... something solid struck her... She gripped it... She didn’t know what
it was... But that was the last chance she had before being sucked into the
vacuum...! Banging the gun on the wall, holding the thing with her left hand,
she felt the softness of the wall... “Rubber?” she didn’t recognize. Holding the gun firmly... she fired.... The
filth exploded... The tunnel burst with the pressure and all the medical
hazardous waste : Red bags (blood waste), infectious waste, surgical waste,
injection needles, rubber gloves and tubing, tissues and bandage, drop-bags,
medical remains, scalpels, infectious and pathological waste, blood plasma
remains, cloths, laboratory waste, medicine remains, glass pipette, plastic
samples, steel tools, etc. Exploded with a bang.
For Dhatri, the soft material tore... she tore it further
thrusting the gun..... the vacuum suction was humming loudly... the filth oozed
out .... she held on...! Aiming the gun ahead she fired again...! She could feel
the flames zooming into the tunnel.... She frantically thrust her hand inside
the soft material still holding on to the gun, slipping towards the engulfing
flames...!
“Boom....!” the explosion ahead reverberated....! She
tried to grip the moving floor with her hand, finding something leathery under
her body...! “Awaa....” Something struck her forcefully hurling in the
tunnel...! She propped herself up struggling to stay at one place on the
conveyer belt like floor...! The new material chocked the tunnel...! She pushed
her head banging it on the material to make some room to move ..! The dry
material moved under her body and she felt it... “Files?” she grabbed some of
them with the leathery box, again thrusting her gun inside the rubber, propping
her head to tear it further..!
“Huff... Haa...!” She could inhale fresh air...! She
found herself propping her head above a tunnel like pipe with the soft
bends...! She hopped herself up struggling... gasping for breath...! She aimed
and fired a shot at the mouth of the pipe at some distance...! “Four down...
only two remaining..!” she counted the bullets left in her gun...!
She held the leather box and grabbing some dry material to her chest came out
of the rubber bend...! She was soaked
with filth, blood, pricked several times, bruises all over, with a short surgical,
translucent gown, practically nothing inside under it...! She jumped off... and
saw a huge erection engulfing in the fire...! The flames rose upto the
sky. She ran for her life...
The sirens blew all over.... Fire alarms hooted out...
Security guards closing in she ran towards the clearing...! The Mass-Burn
Incinerator Furness had caught fire, release of poisonous gases and infectious
medical waste..!
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“You think, she can fit into this?” Aidy pulled Rini
back. “She would fit into anything...
Damn this Incinerator basket..!” Rini dashed ahead and opened the lid.
“Its always locked.... Only the Doctor has the key...!”
Aidy’s voice trailed looking at the open lid of the medical waste outlet...! .
“Dhatri... Dhaa..!” Rini shouted putting her head into it...!
“Its not a basket, Rini... Its a chute...!” Rini looked
at Vinit...! He ran out followed by Rini and Aidy
Ravi’s phone buzzed...! “Haan..!” he huffed running
towards the main exit..
“Ravi... Incineration chute.....! “ Vinit yelled his
lungs out dashing inside the elevator..! Ravi and Jim changed their route.
“Where is the incineration plant?” he asked a aghast
looking receptionist. She gestures at
some direction unable to talk. The
warning hooters had blocked her mind.
Ravi and Jim ran out, around the front of the hospital, crossing the
Parking space, Running for life... In the open land and froze looking at the
flames rising into the skies...!
“Shit..! Dhatri...!” Ravi ran with top speed followed
closely by Jim.
“Dhatri... Dhatri...” They both shouted their hearts
out...! And he saw her figure... covered, soaked with filth, medical waste,
clutching something to her chest with a gun in the other hand...!
“Dhatri...!” They both froze just in front of her, trying
hard to recognize her... The smell was deadly, the only thin cloth she had on
her body was torn, her body beyond recognition with filth, waste blood, plasma,
with cotton waste stuck on her knees...! She ran forward and stopped. Ravi looked at her and the next moment she
was in his embrace. Jim looked on...!
“Ravi...” Dhatri wailed and Ravi couldn’t stop his
tears...!
“Dhut Teri...! Oh, Dhaa...! Mari mai... Thank you...!” he
blurted pressing her head on his chest.
She broke down completely...
“Hey Dhatri...!” Jim hugged both of them overwhelmed with
emotions...!
***** *****
No Comments really..i cant explain what i am feeling imagining her in that chute..and she is out..
ReplyDeleteThank you Dayavanti... and yes she is finally out..! unharmed?? yet to be seen..!
DeleteOh my!..fabulous update Khushifan...last part was very touching..."she ran forward and stopped..." but Ravi embraced her without any inhibition....she fought for herself...and out with the help of her loved ones...never to forget US trip for all concerned...Thank you so much for such a wonderful read...
ReplyDeleteThank you mymind... Let us see what is in store for her now...!
DeleteI feel so relaxed after so many days. Thanks a lot :) What next?
ReplyDeleteHumm Time to relax ... atleast for some time for Dhaa too...! Than you Aparna..!
Deletewaiting for the next update
ReplyDeleteHere is a next update for you!
DeleteWow - the suspense was killing KF.. Such an intense and gripping update - poor Dhaa struggling in the horrible mess of hospital waste and just escaping from being incinerated - and after all the planning and plotting by her "rescuers" she made it out on her own steam. So glad Ravi was there - he was as worried about her as Rini was. Thanks for a fabulous update KF. A really unforgettable US trip for Dhaa - she may never want to see the US again! Quite a problem, since the guy who is besotted with her works and lives in the US...
ReplyDeleteStarlight, that was a comment!! Yes, she will never forget her US trip... But will she be able to stay away from US? let us see...!
DeleteLet me take a shower first for dhaa :P great update! the suspense has finally been justified...she has been found!!
ReplyDeleteYeah... :) finally time to take shower for Dhaa... Loved your comment... hehehe...
DeleteI have a bone to pick with u...why have u made Vinit so useless...I mean all he does is points things out to Rini or others or just say Rini Rini...really disappointed with his lack of meaty action in the rescue :(
ReplyDeleteHello,
DeleteThank you for the comment... very honest one! But to be very candid with you, I really don't have the answer for your question... I can only say, Its Vinit's personality and you don't have to be a meaty action hero always.. A pray does not know from where the hawk swoops down and completes the kill... !! May be he sounds useless ... but Rini knows his worth...! After all he is a M.I. Guy!
Thanks for your comment...!
Nice update, waiting for more.
ReplyDeleteThank you Myla... After a very long time I got a comment from you...! Here is a new update...!
DeleteDear KF, wonderful superb update :) As always I am kind of speechless, so don't have words to describe.. Thank you for the dhamakedaar update. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you SG. Hope you liked it..!
DeleteHi Khushifan!!
ReplyDeleteWhat an update!! What an ordeal!! Dhaatri's ordeal in the waste disposal chute was nothing short of an explosive one... "she spat out the filth from her mouth and then, she spat again, this time her rage".... well portrayed. Its a wonder she has come out in one piece, but covered with all the infectious filth and breathing the poisonous gases!! And she has created a complete pandemonium for her captor!!
What a reunion!! It was lovely!! He saw her figure, froze, she ran forward and stopped, but then he took her in his embrace... beautiful!! Jim hugged both of them again says a lot!! This is the first time she is calling him Ravi!!
Excellent update.... Dhaatri is back with her family. Very well-written!!