“Dhaa.....”
Rini blurted aghast. Dhatri had dropped
down on her knees and was holding Swarnima’s bleeding wrist. Her eyes rolled up, she went into a kind of trance. She was seeing herself floating in the air
with cool breeze engulfing... She was weightless... flying away... .Soon the
tremors hit her..! She was seeing things which were not there... She was in a
different world...!
Both Rini and
Suresh turned motionless with shock.
They both had experienced her healing powers but had never seen her
healing someone else. Swarnima had
closed her eyes.... The blood was gushing out....
She suddenly
felt the warmth entering her body... calming her down considerably. The physical pain was subsiding making it
bearable and the mental anguish had vanished.
She felt her heart filled with divine calmness, giving her
confidence....A strange feeling of peace engulfed her! She moaned and Rini came
out of shock. “Suresh....!” she held his
hand. He was looking at the scene ahead
mesmerized...! The bleeding had stopped... Dhatri’s swollen, blood soaked
fingers were moving magically over Swarnima’s wrist...! They could hear a low groan of pain... Suresh leaned forward to be pulled back by Rini...! 'They can’t
stop Dhatri now...!' She was in trance, her muscles flexing...receiving
uncontrollable convulsions....
“Seizure...!”
They both looked at each other panicking...! She was getting seizure.. her body
was twitching... her mouth foaming...her hands shaking uncontrollably....
“No...!” Rini
screamed leaping forward to pull Dhatri apart.... “Trismus....!” She looked at
Suresh who had held on to her. “We
should stop this...!” she blurted. For
the first time she saw the severity of the problem... Dhatri had got ‘grand-mal’
with a lockjaw...! She dropped down on the ground in a heap and Rini ran
forward...!
“Water...!” she
yelled lifting Dhatri up in her arms...! Suresh ran towards the building
cursing, kicking himself for not keeping the water ready. Dhatri was burning with temperature..... She
needed help...!
Suresh suddenly
stopped and came back running...!
“Get the
water... goddamn it!” Rini yelled.
Swarnima opened her eyes and looked at her wrist. The bleeding had completely stopped... the veins
seemed to have sealed themselves stopping the blood stream. The white slit... with flesh was visible on
her wrist, with no pain....!
“Miracle...”
she blurted and her eyes travelled to Dhatri on the ground...
“Oh My God...!”
She got up with a jerk to be stopped by Rini.
Rini pushed her back on the bench...!
“Suresh...!”
she yelled. He looked at her standing
over Dhatri’s burning body...!
“Didi... Admit
her ... take her to the hospital...!” he said panting and sucking his breath
with apprehension.
“What?” For a
fleeing second Rini raised her hand to hit Suresh... but then her eyes
flashed... “Yes... I have to admit her to the hospital....To get an entry
inside....!” She heaved Dhatri’s body and Suresh ran forward to help her.
“Seizure...!
She is sick...” he yelled carrying Dhatri.
Rini looked behind. “Stay
there...!” she ordered Swarnima who was trying to follow them...! Swarnima sat
back on the bench. Dharini and Suresh
carried Dhatri yelling their lungs out for help....seeing the sentries running out
for help! Dharini would complete the formalities and paper work, being the elder sister of Dhatri.
*********** **********
“Mr Deo..!”
Mrs. Russel had made a drink for Sayajirao.
He took the glass and slumped back on the chair closing his eyes....! His
son was on his way to India...That India, his home, he left behind twenty six years ago,
never to return.
His son, now
around twenty six was just a few months old when he landed in New York, US of
A. It was a herculean task to rear an
infant taking care of his physical and emotional needs. Then he found an angel called Mrs. Russel
through a housekeeping agency. A black Afro American lady, Mrs. Russel, traveled from downtown everyday. Gradually she became a part of the family as
Ravi wouldn’t leave her alone even for her weekly off and due annual
vacations. Ravi was growing up and Sayajirao decided to
shift to Bay area for better prospects.
Ravi, aged five agreed only on the condition that Mrs. Russel shifted
with them. She agreed. Then there was no looking back. Sayajirao’s business saw no boundaries. He had started with an employment in a
concept car design company and slowly shifted to consultancy in automation,
targeting small and medium businesses, bringing in turnarounds, taking up
turnkey projects and consulting on changing processes for better productivity.
Sayajirao
shifted a bit and opened his eyes to see the aging Mrs. Russel picking up his
empty glass. She looked at him
questioningly and he gave her a nod to fix another drink for him. He looked around opening his eyes. His gigantic villa came into view as he
rubbed his palms on his eyes. He picked
up the glass...! His lips curled up in an inwardly smile...! Every time they
changed the house, Ravi insisted on having more space, more rooms....! Why? Ravi
couldn’t tell...! He only asked... “what if there are more people in the house?
What if there are more guests?” Sayajirao could guess his crave for a
family. Unfortunately, he had none. He had left everyone behind.
“The house
looked so lively, when all of them were here...!” he looked up
at Mrs. Russel. She merely smiled. Indeed the house... the huge villa had come
alive when Dhatri and her family was here.
She missed them all too! Suddenly, Sayajirao got up, went into the Pooja
Ghar and lighted the lamp. Mrs. Russel
looked surprised.
“Let his dreams
come true....!” he prayed. “Amen...!”
she prayed too....!
***** ******
*****
Rini’s phone
buzzed... “Ravi...!” she hurriedly went aside.
He had landed on Indira Ganghi International Airport...! Rini felt overwhelmed....! “Ravi... “ she
couldn’t control her emotion...
“Hey... Rini...
!” He too didn’t know how to console her.
“Give me the directions.... !” he said distracting her. She gave him the directions mentioning the
landmarks...! He disconnected. She
looked up wiping her face and saw her mama papa entering the compound with
Abbaji, wng. Cndr. Virender Pandit. A
lot had happened in between. Rini had to
cover up.... Cover up cleverly...!
“Dharini...!”
Ammaji, swarnima had placed her hand on Rini’s shoulder standing with her for
support. Suresh came out wiping his
sweat.
“Didi...
Finally...!” he stopped looking at the trio at the entrance. Rini looked at him threateningly.
“Go!” she said
and Suresh left hurriedly. “Where are
you going?” Salil asked surprised.
“Umm... Papa..
Ravi has come... Suresh usse laanay gaya hain...!” She said glancing at
Swarnima who had hidden her wrist behind....!
“And where is
Dhatri...?” asked Nilima pressing her hand on her chest, worriedly.... Rini and
Swarnima gaped at each other.
Hello
ReplyDeleteSorry for the delay in posting... hope you like this one....
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KF
Hello Khushifan,
ReplyDeleteNice update,
Aur aap ka sorry toh banta hi hai......i keep checking your blog again and again for updates lol (most of us might be doing that).
But again thanks for this lovely fiction..... i once upon a time thought ki people wouldn't in interested in any fiction that doesn't involve Arnav and Khushi, but Apopinion and you proved this wrong.
Hey Myla... Sorry again... for late update...! Actually it was very tragic episode... I, myself couldn't post Vinit's death... so had to rewrite it again which took a lot of time...!
DeleteThank you very much for reading...!
Hi di,
ReplyDeleteLovely update as usual! The story is going simply SUPERB! Ravi has arrived! I wonder what his reaction will be when he sees dhaa. Waiting and hoping for some romance!Please continue soon.
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Thank you Akansha...! Dhaa is not yet in that set of mind for romance... but time surely will come when she will realize...
DeleteSo Dhatri's powers are intact!!! Looking forward to future updates....
ReplyDeleteYes Dhatri's powers are intact but her suffering has intensified...! Why? Let us see in upcoming updates...
DeleteThank you ..!
Nice thinking by Suresh and Rini...wonder how the trio are going to cover up!...
ReplyDeleteYour description about the house and the dreams attached to it ...mostly Ravi's concern about making more space....brought smile along with the realization of their painful loneliness and their longing to wipe that out ...thanks for the wonderful post...
You again are bang on... Ravi cannot explain his loneliness... but somewhere deep down he craves for a family..!
DeleteLet us see how it shapes....!
Thank you for your wonderful comment...!
Hi Khushifan!!
ReplyDeleteSo Dhaatri is in... and in what way,... she herself in a precarious position, depending on others to bail her out!! Oh, finally Rini and Suresh saw the miracle!! Good thinking by Suresh, but then at the cost of so much pain to Dhaatri!! How much more they need to cover up or can they?? Loved the way Rini took command over Swarnima, both times!!
"Let his dreams come true".... a fervent prayer by Sayyajirao for his son was so emotional. A lonely boy longing for a family, is keeping his hopes alive by enlarging on spaces everytime...."what if there are more people in the house?" is his emotional cry of hope,... and that is profound!! Now he is here to help the family at their time of crisis,... hope and strength to Rini and Dhaatri!!
"Where is Dhaatri?"... wonder how Rini is going to cover up for her!!
Wonderful update... description of the miracle was well-written!!
And really sorry for my late reply!!
Svkuki.. Thanks a ton for wonderful, insightful comment... Ravi's loneliness draws him closer to Dhatri and brings more pain...!
DeleteLet us see what happens next...!
Hi KF - sorry have been off the grid for a few days - my father's ill health. Just caught up on 5 updates and it was a treat for me to read them all at one shot :) So Dhaa is now on a heal Vinit mission. Am sure Ravi will not be happy when he comes to know. I hope she can heal Vinit without harming herself too much. Swarnima was just being a mother - clinging on to the hope that Dhaa could heal her son. Beautifully written as always KF. Waiting for the next update :)
ReplyDeleteDear Starlight... Oh! How is he now? Please take good care of him and yourself...! My best wishes and prayers are with you...!
DeleteMissed your comments badly.. glad that you are back with a bang. Thank you for reading the story...!