“Why did you
call me, Mamma? I already have missed so many lectures...!”She asked thoroughly
irritated.
“But I asked
you to come over the weekend... not on Thursday... bunking your lectures...!”
Nilima said smirking. Dhatri was caught
off guard.
“Dhaa...!”
Disha was at the door and Dhatri ran towards her.
“Didi.. I don’t
understand... Why you all are so worried about my future..? I will do something
on my own to support myself...!” Dhatri said annoying Disha further.
“For God sake,
Dhaa... Don’t create a scene when they are here...” Disha said grabbing
Dhatri’s shoulder.
“Create a
scene? Have you ever seen me even talking when your in-laws were here? I only
talk to Bhanu Bhaiya...!” Disha jerked herself free. “But I have a
question... Why are they coming here?” Dhatri asked her mamma. Nilima gave her a mysterious smile and Disha
frowned....!
“Why can’t
these people understand? “ she thought worriedly. Kalindi, her brother in law Avadhesh and his
wife Kranti were invited and Nilima seemed to be super excited.
“What is so
special, mamma?” Dhatri asked poking her mamma.
She smiled and said .. “Its about your future...”
“Oh. Is it? Are
you guys planning to arrange for an employment interview here?” She asked
sarcastically and Nilima burst out in laughter...!
“Your sense of
humor is deadlier when you are annoyed,,, Dhaa...!” She patted on Dhaa’s
cheek. Dhaa turned and squeaked...
“Uncle.... What
are you doing here?” Indroneel walked in ... in a very festive dress...!
“And what is
this? A typical Bongie dress...? What is
special, uncle? “ She asked swinging his hand.
He grinned fanning the edge of his Dhoti. His green silk kurta was shimmering...!
Dhatri winked wickedly...!
“Have you come
here to do the pooja, by any chance, uncle?” She asked in a whisper leaning
towards him.
“Haan? Jaya
Jaya he Mahishasuramardini... Ramya kapardini Shailasute...? Haan?” She mocked and he gripped her neck.
“Naak
Ragado...” He pushed her towards Pooja Ghar holding by her neck...
“Don’t make fun
of god...!” he reprimanded.
“But I am
not..! I am making fun of you...!” she said trying to turn back with a silly
grin..!
“Don’t make fun
of your Guru...! Naak Ragado...” he turned her forceably and pointed at his
feet. She again grinned...!
“Jutain
nikalo... remove your footwear...!” she said loudly and he released her turning
to go out to remove his chappals...! She
vanished in no time...!
“Dhaa... come
here!” He shouted on deaf ears...!”
“Dhaa...!”
Salil called out and Dhaa’s figure appeared at the door. Looking at his stern face she dashed to
Indroneel’s feet...! “Sorry Guruji...” she said waiting for his blessing. He pulled her in his embrace...!
“Bhalo...!” he
patted on her head. She rolled her
eyes... “Why are you here?” she asked curiously and Indroneel ignored her
turning his face and moved out. She
stomped.
“No one is
telling me, what’s going on...” she stormed out of the house to play with the
neighbor’s five year old son Rajveer...!
“Enjoy your
meeting and decide my future... but mind you... I will do what I want to...!”
she raised her finger looking back at her bustling house...!
It was eight in
the evening when she walked in and froze at the door hearing heated
arguments.
“But, Disha...
It’s not like that.... We are not taking any hasty decision... Ofcourse we will
talk to Dhaa about it...!” Bhanu was pacifying furious Disha. She shook her head in disapproval.
“No Bhanu... I
won’t approve of this. We need to do the
background check...!” she said glancing at Kalindi.
“But Beti... I
am telling you... He is a thorough gentleman...! Please try and understand...!
And we are not forcing anything on anyone... Its just a discussion...! “ she
said mildly.
“Yeah...
Baba.... I was so happy when I heard it...!” Indroneel said and invited the
wrath of Disha.
“Please stay
out of this, Dr. Ghosh... It’s a family matter...!” she snapped...!
“Yeah.. Its a
family matter... and I don’t see you all different from my family...” he said
unaffected. Dhatri clenched her fists
standing behind the main door.
“How can Disha
didi be so rude to uncle?” She frowned...!
“Indro...Sorry..!”
Salil apologized. “Never mind!”
Indroneel dismissed and took the discussion further.
“He has made
his intentions clear...! Saya has talked to me...! I am happy with it... And
Disha you are right...! One should do the background check..!” Kalandi took a
breath.
“Yes... You can
talk to Mr. Rehman... One of his managers... you can talk to Avadhesh... his
long time associate... Talk to me, Disha... “ Kalindi said urging. Disha seemed unmoved. Bhanu stepped in.
“Do you want to
talk to his business associates?” he asked raising his voice a bit. “I can give you the list...” Disha shook her
head and then looking at each one of them asked firmly...
“What about his
mother?” Kalindi’s mouth fell open in horror.
“What? What
about that? There was a breakup.. that's it...! She is not in their lives...
Thats it!” Bhanu said as a matter of fact.
Disha shook her head.
“Why was the
breakup...?” she asked and Bhanu gaped at his wife who proclaimed to be
American ...!
“For Godsake,
Disha... Stop it!” Bhanu requested. But
Disha refused to look at him.
“Mamma-Papa...
should we not be more careful...? Its a question of Dhaa’s life... We should know
the reason for the breakup...!” she said sounding logical. Everyone gaped at her.
“I will ask him
about it...!” She took the decision for herself and Kalindi got up.
“Beti...
Please... Don’t unearth the buried skeletons...! It will be pain and misery for
Saya and Ravi...” Kalindi urged with heavy voice, her throat hurting.
“Please... don’t
get emotional, Maaji... I am just trying to bring to your notice and other
facets of this issue...!” Disha held Kalindi’s hand.
“Its about my
younger baby sister...! I must know... everything about the two... “ she said
calming down a bit.
“I will tell
you everything Disha... I am her sister... Please please... don’t ask anything
about this to Saya...” Kalindi looked at Nilima for support.
“Anguish...
Painful? Ravi’s mother? “ Dhaa stood rooted to the ground ....!
“Ravi has a
painful past? He never told me anything about it...!” She thought. “But why would he tell me and why should I be
bothered to know, what happened in the past?” she asked herself questioning
herself, whether she really wanted to know about Ravi’s past...!
“If it is so
painful...why should I know? Why should he tell this to anyone? Will my life
change if I knew?” she asked herself confused.
And then the things got Christel clear...!
“She wouldn’t
ask Ravi or his father anything... That wouldn’t change anything in their
life... No one else had the right to dig out the pain and anguish...! “ She
stepped in. Everyone stopped talking and
looked at her startled. She dashed into
her room and heard faint murmur from the hall.
People had resumed their discussion.
She opened the
bag... took out the gift packet and with slightly shaking hands, tore opened
the box....! Her eyes popped out...mouth fell open.. her throat went dry...!
The discussion
outside and the gift inside made sense...!
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Suspense! suspense! suspense!..ta da -----ta da -----tadaaaaaaa.....the gift was his confession????....confession of love???...anyway thank god the gift was nothing edible :))...
ReplyDeleteWhere's our Rini and the free Vini?...did their marriage happen or yet to happen?
Thanks for the wonderful update with an ending leaving us hanging upside down ;)
Heheheh.. what if it was a banana or something? Hii.. Lol..! Rini and Vinit ... humm you will see what they are doing... and where...!
DeleteThank you for your equally wonderful comment, Mymind..!
please update more frequently. There is a lot of gap in between the updates. the update was lovely
ReplyDeleteThank you anonymous and yes i will try to update regularly...
DeleteHere is a new update for you. Hope you like it.
Hello Khushifan,
ReplyDeleteLooks like dhaa is going to reject the proposal to save ravi from ever so 'I know it all' Disha.
Your To-do-list includes suspense of JL, gift and Ravi's past
Love the way the story is unfolding.
Hey myla... it worked exactly opposite... now let us see the fireworks...!
DeleteThank you for your beautiful comment. and I checked one item from the to do list, out... the gift... now only JL and Past? or will the list grow? let us see... hehehehe
This is getting so interesting ..I really like the way dhaa's character is unfolding new facets in every update..but I am still confused abt what exactly happened at the hospital with dhaa and vini
ReplyDeleteWhat happened between vini and dhaa? you will soon hear about it...! For now.. enjoy the new update and be ready for some glitter and fireworks...! hehehe
DeleteHey kf,
ReplyDeleteSorry couldn't comment 4 some time.. Wat a relief after d Vinit tragedy.. N such a lovely update..I kept smiling throughout... Pls pls update soon.. Very curious to noe wats dat gift..
Kajal.
Kajal, thank you... updated the new episode. hope you like this one too...
Deletehi KF sorry i couldn't leave my comments regularly as my damn phone is not allowing even i am tying to get new one only for better reading ................ any ways i am huge fan of your all writing i used re read every post u update here starting form opposite pole and p - 2 - V and now the this I used wait long in night just for ur updates my mom is getting tensed u know with this behavior.
ReplyDeleteplease do regular updates well i don't know abt other i will definitely read them i will give comments when come to net u know please ...........................
a big thanks from ur fan.............
this is srav
DeleteThanks a ton anonymous... I am overwhelmed... hope you like Dhatri too... Its on a different track...! Keep commenting...
DeleteIs it a ring for proposal?
ReplyDeleteBang on Aparna...!
DeleteHi Khushifan!!
ReplyDeleteLoved Dhaatri's childishness, retorts, pranks.... hahaa, "enjoy your meeting and decide my futre... but I will do what I want to", what a threat in finality!! Loved Dhaatri's questioning herself vis-a-vis her equations with Ravi!! What a fantastic one-liner at the end!!
Disha's desperate efforts, interferences, and questioning would only backfire on her. As I said before, she inadvertently will bring them closer... yeah, such a blessing in disguise!!
Will not speculate on the last line, as you are a master at surprises, and proving us wrong, hehehee!!
Wonderful update... very well-written, with the conversations between people keeping pace in an interesting way on a central theme, "Dhaatri"!!
Thank you very much Svkuki for catching up with my emotions exactly...! Hope you like this update too..!
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