Wednesday, 5 March 2014

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“Dhatri...!” Jim came to Vinit and Dhatri.  He had sneaked out to the pool side with the raised voices of the family members, not wanting to embarrass them more.  Vinit looked at his grim face and helped Dhatri on the easy chair.   

“Dhaa... Don’t worry about anything else now...!” He stroked on her head.  Dhatri closed her eyes whimpering, trying to control her tears...! Jim took her hand in his, sitting beside her silently, with all his energy drained out. 

“Don’t touch me... I am filth..!” Dhatri withdrew her hand.  He didn’t give up.  Holding her tightly, he said...”You are not filth, Dhatri... everything is curable, manageable..!” she looked up at him.  He nodded looking at her.

“Yes, Dhatri... everything is curable... You will be same Dhatri again...!” he patted and leaning towards her kissed her forehead.  Vinit gaped at his gesture. 

“Its like cleaning up the mess..!” Jim said, his voice cracking, anguished.  She looked into the distance, unfocused.  Vinit stood there leaving it to Jim. 

“What if its not curable?” she asked aghast.  Jim looked at her intently... “Then we will manage with medicines...” she looked at him confused... He smiled faintly. 

“It’s like managing diabetes or Blood pressure.. Dhatri..” Vinit sat on the floor keeping his hands on her laps.  She remembered her father, her papa had blood pressure and he took a tablet every day...! 

“Humm... ” she let out her breath..! Vinit and Jim exchanged glances.  They had a chance...!   They waited patiently for her to cool down...!  But inside, the atmosphere was burning...

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“Disha, please stop...” Bhanu urged looking at Rini to help him.  She was rendered speechless at Disha’s attitude.  Disha saw Dhatri was taken away and lowered her voice. 

“Why didn’t you take her to the hospital immediately?” she asked accusing.  Rini gaped.  She had no justification.  But the Doctor said...

“Oh! That would have been disastrous... she would have gone into shock, considering the tremendous stress she had undergone. !” Disha gaped at the Doctor.  Sayajirao came forward...

“Thank you Doctor, I will get her to your hospital..” he said and the Doctor turned to him. 

“Mr. Deo, we can start with her physical examination... !” she said  “Yes” Sayajirao nodded.  She understood his worries.  “Don’t worry... I will handle it.  You just get her to the hospital...” she said smiling confidently and Rini took a sigh of relief. 

“What are we waiting for?” Disha got up with jerk.  “Can you not see the danger?” she asked flaring up. 

“bhai...” Ravi had cooled down a bit.  Bhanu got up and placed his hand on Ravi’s shoulder. 

“Ravi, I am not talking only about her, I am talking about all of us..! We all are at risk...” Disha started off her justification. 

“Just stop it..!” Ravi yelled clenching his fists...! Bhanu tried to pull him back. 

“I don’t understand, why are you being so soft... Just take her to the hospital for her check up!” Disha said looking at Rini.  “You are putting yourself in grave danger...” Disha’s voice trailed as she heard the bang.  She saw Dhatri’s figure at the door.  Ravi threw the glass on the floor shattering it with noise.

“Fine.. I will take that Risk...!” he said and turning to his father said ... “Dad.. I want to marry her...! Then she is my responsibility... “ Disha gaped with dropped jaw.  Rini pressed her hand on her chest.  Indroneel sat on the chair with a thud... Bhanu turned into a statue and Sayajirao came forward ....! But before he could say anything... Disha retorted..!

“Are you out of your mind, Ravi?” Ravi turned to her aggressively. 

“No, I am not! You all are...! In fact, you, Disha... You are out of your mind..!” he said pointing his finger at her.  Disha was taken aback.  She looked at everyone...! No response!

“I think, first, we should take her to the hospital... Marrying her doesn’t come into picture...” she said looking at Ravi. 

“Yes.. it does!” Ravi clenched his fists... “She is my responsibility from now on...! I don't care if she is infected... abused or even rap...” he said with determination. 

“Ravi...” Rini spoke in a ghostly voice... “You stay out of this..” Ravi turned to her.  Disha changed her track for the fear of losing the battle.

“Do you think, Dhaa will agree?” she asked disdainfully.

“Yes!” came a firm voice and everyone turned.  Dhaa was standing clutching the frame of the door.

“Dhaa...!” Rini tried to move towards Dhaa.  Dhatri raised her hand a bit.  Rini saw Vinit and Jim behind Dhatri.  Dhatri took a step forward...! 

“Will you, even if I am infected...a filth?” she asked looking straight into Ravi’s eyes.

“Yes..!” he said firmly.

“Even if I refuse to see a Doctor?” she quivered a bit and Disha opened her mouth to retort but Ravi raised his hand to stop everyone from reacting and coming forward said..

“Yes, Dhatri.. even if you refuse to see the doctor, I will marry you...” he held Dhatri’s hand gently.  Dhatri drew a deep breath and turned to others....!

“I am ready to go to the hospital...!” she said to everybody’s relief.  And then turning to Ravi, said..

“Marrying me is a bigger risk than these infections...” Sayajirao dashed forward wiping his tears and hugging her, said

“I will be the happiest person in the world, if that happens...! If Ravi takes that Risk...!” Dhatri gaped speechless....! 





29 comments:

  1. Hello,

    Things have taken an unexpected turn... Let us see what happens after this...! hehehe.. Enjoy!

    KF

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    1. Thanks for the update, waiting for the next

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  2. What a proposal!! Its blown me lets see what it does to ravi and dhaa when the shock and adrenalin wears off...is it just me or are there certain similarities between Arnav and Ravi...hmm...food for thought :P Great Job! Can Vinit be the one to give a big put-down to Disha...please! Great update!!

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    1. Anonymous, Thanks a lot. humm... the interesting point is who comes to senses first... Ravi or Dhatri? Read on.....

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  3. Loved loved loved the update..
    Jim made her see things and Ravi's proposal gave her courage to go through medical...I am so glad that Dhaa has these people in her life...
    Ravi is becoming the anchor of her life and she is accepting that...
    Though I am scared for Dhaa thinking what all infections she might have caught, I hope they will be able to detect everything and help her stay healthy
    Shame on you Disha, how would you be able to look at yourself at the mirror...such a selfish creature......
    PS: Sorry KF, for not commenting for such a longg time

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    1. Hey Nisha, thank you for the comment... See what happens next..! Can't help... there are people like Disha everywhere.. We have to live with them... And surprisingly, they have justification for all their actions...! Read on for this....!

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  4. oh ya, and forgot to add, though I am glad that Ravi proposed to her, somehow it is difficult for me to believe that she is of marriageable age now..I still see the 5 yr old Dhaa who was kidnapped...Am I crazy to think so????

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    1. And yes, she is in final year of engineering doing project under Ravi... hehehehe...

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    2. Though she is still a kid for all those around her... ! hehehe... you seem to be one of them...! Good! hehehehe

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  5. I had been thinking about this before also but is she not able to cure herself if she can cure others.. I mean can she not sense her illness if she has infections..

    Disha is one such member of dhaas family which everyone in todays world has..I hope you get my point..

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    1. Hey, thank you, Dayavanti...

      She can't cure herself. she is not a perpetual machine you see...! She can sense others' illness...!

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  6. I had been thinking about this before also but is she not able to cure herself if she can cure others.. I mean can she not sense her illness if she has infections..

    Disha is one such member of dhaas family which everyone in todays world has..I hope you get my point..

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  7. LOL....“Marrying me is a bigger risk than these infections...”...and he is ready to take the risk!....think should thank Disha now ....if it weren't for her wonder how many more years it would have taken Ravi to say so ;)....What more can Dhaa ask for?!...

    Lovely update...the proposal made it lovelier and lighter....and happy that she agreed to visit the hospital...thank you Khushifan...:)

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    1. hihih.. Dhaa knows what she is... and how risky it is to spend life with her...! hehehe... Let us see how Ravi tackles this...!

      Enjoy..

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  8. Hey ...and thanks for clearing the doubt regarding her abilities to cure herself...it's a 2-way blessing....she gives and others give back...she's blessed with the gift to cure others and and also blessed with selfless people like her who would cure her with their love...

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  9. OMG!!! I am totally speechless..
    Thank you for a quick update KF.. :) and also for taking time to reply to all our comments... :)

    And what a proposal!!!... :) which made Dhaa to agree to see the doc Ha ha... :D I love the way both Dhaa & Ray work.. :D
    By the way, I thought Dhaa is still a teenager and Ravi like 20-21 years?? Chalo they can have a long engagement with the cute fights going on ;)
    Have to agree with Nisha, sometimes I do feel like Dhaa is still 5 years old :P

    & I don't wan't comment about Disha.. still MAAAAD at her!!! hum baat nahin karenge uske baare mein!! x-(

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    1. Thank you SG for your comment... Dhaa is in final year engineering... heheheh ....

      humm

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  10. wow... great update. maza aa gaya :) Lets see what you have in store for us.

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  11. So action-packed and tremendous! Ravi is simply WOW! He truly loves her so much, taking her as she is. His sudden proposal left me breathless! True example of power of love! Please continue soon di! I missed your story like hell!
    Love

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  12. Another lovely update.

    Can anybody show disha a mirror and punch her from me...... even jim who is an outsider understands the emotional trauma dhaa is undergoing but this disha from the beginning is altogether evil reminds me of my brothers.............

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    1. Yes Myla, there are people like Disha everywhere, in every family... Thank you for your comment after a long time...!

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  13. Awwww.. How sweet Ravi is - just love how he stood up for Dhaa - his love is shining forth! Just adored his proposal - and Dhaa in typical "Dhaa" style - marrying me is a bigger risk..." - too cute. One does feel like hating Disha for her insensitivity - but then that is the character she is - she has always put herself first so her reaction is not surprising.. Also she and Dhaa have always been at logger heads from childhood. At least our girl agreed for the medical check up :) - Waiting for the next update KF. Thanks for this wonderful one -actually I read 105-107 in one shot.

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    1. Thank you starlight... and you again have caught the crux of the personalities... we can't help but put up with such persons...!

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  14. Wow.. Wat a dhamakedaar update it was.. Vry surprising n beautiful.. No one had probably thot dis wud happen...
    Chalo..Dhaa has agreed..she has found her strength back...she z a fighter n um sure she will come out of dis also.. Loved Ray totally..
    Thanks n Pls update soon

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    1. Thank you Kajal.. hope you like the new update too...!

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  15. Hi Khushifan!!

    How well Jim put across the matter so practically and effectively; and Ravi dealt with it emotionally.... what a proposal and what an answer, "Marrying me is a bigger risk than these infections", hahaa, loved it!! She was already contemplating on Jim's explanations and Ravi's passionate avowal of his feelings only gave her the stimulus and the courage to take the bull by the horns!! Difference in Rini's and Disha's response to Ravi's outburst is so contrasting... !!

    Wonderful update... loved it!!

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