Dhatri shuddered and looked at pooja ghar. Before Indroneel could call her, she should
leave.
“Let us go...!” she looked at Vinit expecting him to
accompany her. Indroneel was at the door
chanting some mantras... She turned her back and moved towards the main
door...
Indroneel’s tempo and voice of chanting mahishasur
madrini stotram, raised .... Everyone looked at him. Dhatri, avoiding everybody continued her
walk.
अयि जगदम्ब मदम्ब कदम्ब वनप्रियवासिनि हासरते
शिखरि शिरोमणि तुङ्गहिमलय शृङ्गनिजालय मध्यगते ।
मधुमधुरे मधुकैटभगञ्जिनि कैटभभञ्जिनि रासरते
जय जय हे महिषासुरमर्दिनि रम्यकपर्दिनि शैलसुते ....
Ayi Jagad[t]-Amba Mad-Amba Kadamba Vana-Priyavaasini Haasa-Rate
Shikhari Shiro-Manni Tungga-Himalaya Shrngga-Nija-[Aa]laya Madhya-Gate |
Madhu-Madhure Madhu-Kaittabha-Gan.jini Kaittabha-Bhan.jini Raasa-Rate
Jaya Jaya He Mahissaasura-Mardini Ramya-Kapardini Shaila-Sute || 3 ||
शिखरि शिरोमणि तुङ्गहिमलय शृङ्गनिजालय मध्यगते ।
मधुमधुरे मधुकैटभगञ्जिनि कैटभभञ्जिनि रासरते
जय जय हे महिषासुरमर्दिनि रम्यकपर्दिनि शैलसुते ....
Ayi Jagad[t]-Amba Mad-Amba Kadamba Vana-Priyavaasini Haasa-Rate
Shikhari Shiro-Manni Tungga-Himalaya Shrngga-Nija-[Aa]laya Madhya-Gate |
Madhu-Madhure Madhu-Kaittabha-Gan.jini Kaittabha-Bhan.jini Raasa-Rate
Jaya Jaya He Mahissaasura-Mardini Ramya-Kapardini Shaila-Sute || 3 ||
“Dhatri..” Sayajirao called her. She reluctantly looked back. Indroneel beckoned her inside. She frowned.
Ravi looked on. Indroneel looked
at him sternly and beckoned him inside.
Ravi looked at Dhatri who was dragging her feet not wanting to go
inside. He held her hand and pulled her
along. Indroneel had a broad smile,
still chanting the mantras...!
“Humm....” He said thrusting the Aarti and she held it
making faces. He pulled Ravi’s hand.
Ravi was all happy to hold the Aarti with Dhatri. Indroneel had continued with the Mahishasura
Mardini Stotram...!
अयि शतखण्ड विखण्डितरुण्ड वितुण्डितशुण्द गजाधिपते
रिपुगजगण्ड विदारणचण्ड पराक्रमशुण्ड मृगाधिपते । .........
रिपुगजगण्ड विदारणचण्ड पराक्रमशुण्ड मृगाधिपते । .........
Dhatri
was waiting impatiently for the pooja to get over not paying attention to the
rituals. She kept looking around and
glancing at Ravi angrily and he was all smiling closing his eyes
devotionally...!
“Finished?
Good...!” she said keeping the Aariti in front of the idol.
“Wait...
“ Indroneel stopped her angrily and gave Prasad...! She ate it and turned...
“Naak
Ragado...” he ordered and she retorted “How many times?” he grinned, she frowned...!
Ravi pulled her to touch Indroneel’s feet too.
Indroneel placed his hands on their heads murmuring some blessings.
“Dhaa.... I am so happy... You and Ravi...
Oh! Maa... what a couple....” he wiped his eyes and Dhatri took a step back.
“No...!”
she said shocked and “Yes..” he said grinning at her...!
“Now
go to the Doctor... God bless you!” Indroneel said emotionally and Dhatri ran
out. Indroneel held Ravi’s hand... “Keep
her happy...!” he said hoarsely and Ravi promised.. “I will!”
“Chalo...”
Ravi came out and looking at Dhatri’s morose but flushed face, he almost
ordered. Vinit pushed Dhatri a bit. “Go Dhaa...” he said and Dhatri turned.
“You
are not coming?” she asked and he shook his head. “You two go!” Sayajirao said grinning as if
sending them on a date...!
“No...!”
she stomped.
“Dhaa..
I am coming with you..!” Rini said casting a angry look at Vinit. “Yeah.. Let us go!” Disha came forward
too. “What?” both Dhatri and Ravi
turned!
“Yes,
I am coming with you, Dhaa...” Disha said firmly and Rini smiled.
********** ********
********
“What
is she doing in there for so long?” Disha asked Rini. Rini too was losing her patience. Ravi paced the length restlessly. Rini kept glancing at worried Ravi.
“Ravi...”
she beckoned him... “I am going in..” he said impatiently and a faint smile
appeared on Rini’s face. “Sit here!” she
said and he sat clutching his head.
“Hope,
she is alright..” he looked at Rini and she nodded. “She is alright, Ravi... she is a fighter...
“ she said remembering her Dhaa when she was recovered from the highway...after
her kidnapping...! There was nothing they could do than waiting for
Dhatri. Rini was with her for her
pathological tests but Rini was kept away for Dhatri’s physical
examination. Disha was biting her nails
nervously and Rini clenched her fists faking calmness. Ravi lost his patience.
He barged in and froze ....!
Rini
ran after him to stop him.... she gaped at the scene ahead....!
“Dhaa...”
Disha exclaimed as if seeing a ghost ahead.
******** *********
Mr.
Deo, you have some rituals for engagement, right?” Mrs. Russel asked and
Indroneel looked up. “Yes..!” he
answered for Sayajirao looking excited.
Vinit looked up and Jim couldn’t stop himself.
“Engagement...?”
he asked puzzled.
“Yes,
engagement! Ravi and Dhatri’s engagement...!” Indroneel and Sayajirao said at
once. Jim gaped. His phone buzzed.
“Dr,
Koite and Dr. Nixon will arrive in an hour..!” he declared disconnecting the
phone. “I go, receive them...” he said
moving out of the house. Indroneel and
Sayajirao sat there dreaming.... for the engagement. Mrs. Russel gaped at their bright faces and
went inside shaking her head....! After a very long long time... something
auspicious was to happen in the house... !!
She hurriedly ran out to pull open
the door when the doorbell rang...!
************** *********
NOTE:
अयि जगदंब मदंब कदंब वनप्रिय वासिनि हासरते
शिखरि शिरोमणि तुङ्ग हिमालय शृंग निजालय मध्यगते ।
मधु मधुरे मधु कैटभ गंजिनि कैटभ भंजिनि रासरते
जय जय हे महिषासुरमर्दिनि रम्यकपर्दिनि शैलसुते ॥३॥
शिखरि शिरोमणि तुङ्ग हिमालय शृंग निजालय मध्यगते ।
मधु मधुरे मधु कैटभ गंजिनि कैटभ भंजिनि रासरते
जय जय हे महिषासुरमर्दिनि रम्यकपर्दिनि शैलसुते ॥३॥
O Mother of the universe, who enjoy dwelling in Kadambavana, who is anointed with perfume, who sport a gentle smile, who dwell in Your abode on the peak of the lofty Himalaya mountain, the crest-jewel among mountains, who enjoy the sweetness of honey, who slew Madhu and Kaitabha, who destroy all sins, who delight in the Raasa dance, who crushed Mahishasura, who have charming locks of hair, O Daughter of the Mountain, hail unto You, hail unto You.
Hello, Sorry for the delay. Weekends were full of family function... :)
ReplyDeleteHope you like this... preparations for engagement.....!! hehehehawhawhaw
Dhatri ko kya hua....pls don't stop here..I am feeling the same excitement and curiousness when u were doing opposite poles..
ReplyDeleteDhatri ko jo hua so hua... lekin abb dekhanaa hain ki Ravi ko kya hota hain...! hehehe
DeleteThank you Dayavanti, for your comment.
Oh god now what happened? it seems to be sth hilarious btw...looking fwd to the next update!
ReplyDeleteHumm... here is a new update for you...! Thank you for the comment...!
DeleteAb kya hua???
ReplyDeleteJo hona thaa so hua...! humm....
DeleteNow what nautanki is she planning??...Saya has started to dream about everything like a mother would do...he is 2-in-1...but hope the one at the door doesn't pour cold water on his dreams...
ReplyDeleteHumm... Nautanki? I don't know... Destiny is playing nautanki with her..! And your prediction came true... but ... let us see in the next update...!
DeleteThank you!
Hello khushifan,
ReplyDeleteWhat happened to Dhaa?? I feel nervous when you write things like................ Opened the door and froze (and in todays update ghost bhi hai)......aaahhhhh
Humm.... new update reveals what happened... and a glimpse of what will happen next...
DeleteThank you!
So an engagement is on its way!!
ReplyDeleteWill Dhaa really agree to it, is she really ready for a marriage??
What did Ravi see inside, hmm..just wondering...
Wohi hota hain jo manjooray khuda hota hain.... let us see what happens...!
DeleteThank you for the comment...!
Hi di,
ReplyDeleteThe update was AWESOME! So, dhaa and Ravi are going to get engaged! WOW! That was quite fast. I wonder what's up with dhaa?Why is she being so difficult! Disha finally changed though and for good. Glad that she didn't get on my nerves at least for this one update. That's a first!
I'm eager to see what Ravi saw in there! You enjoy leaving us hanging down the cliff, don't you? But I'm not complaining!
And I'll miss your story a lot the one week I'll be away. I'm going out-of-station and I'm going to miss you a lot!
Love and Hug
Akansha, let us see what happens next...! Thank you for your comment..! And enjoy your trip...!
DeleteHi Khushifan!!
ReplyDeleteThe more Dhaatri was avoiding Ravi, the more everyone were pushing her towards Ravi, making her more embarassed, hahaa!! She seems to have made up her mind on something!! And here, the oldies in the dreamland of engagement ceremony!!
All three are in shock... wonder what they saw about Dhaatri in the examining room? Poor Dhaatri... so many tests!!
Great update... there is an air of happiness amidst tension... wonder for how long!!